Words like brillant and amazing just don't do your poems justice Morgan.....and you're probably one of the few talented poets in this world....keep it up..... The One and Only Gnome :)
The first one I found it to be sentimental and innocent, the second poem, I wished that you didn’t focus on the rhyming, because I think it would have been an amazing piece. For the third I really liked it, strong and clear. Just on the side note, I think you should just write and not worry about using all the poetic devices, from a personal perspective, I think it produces better writing. I cant wait to read some of your recent writing. *heart*
In the slaughterhouse of love, they kill Only the best, none of the weak or deformed Don’t run away from this dying. Whoever’s not kill for love is dead meat.
read this today and i thought of you. *heart* i love you
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Only the best, none of the weak or deformed
Don’t run away from this dying.
Whoever’s not kill for love is dead meat.
read this today and i thought of you. *heart* i love you
Eman
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