Fic: What Seems (Ginny, Neville, Luna, G)

[quietliban]

It's been forever since I posted fic. For lyras.

Title: What Seems
Author: quietliban
Rating: G
Summary: Ginny, Neville and Luna make their daring bid for hope. As expected things do not end well and although, things could be worse, it isn't over yet.
Disclaimer: These characters are property of JK Rowling and her associated publishers etc. No profit is being

Comments

[lyras]

I am so sorry it's taken me such a long while to get to this! Since my family went home, I've been in a bit of a panic trying to meet fic and other commitments.

I love your Ginny in the first section. Her thoughts strike me as very true, especially, "that it can't possibly end well, but she has to try. She has to try, for Harry's sake, for her sake, for the sake of Hogwarts and the memory of Professor Dumbledore." I also like the idea of Ginny having a "Weasley temper" - the Blacks shouldn't have a monopoly on a family temper

[quietliban]

Thank you for such wonderful feedback! I'm glad that everything came across. :D

The book was very interesting and it's just amazing what people withstand and the way she's able to draw you into her story...Thank you very much!

[vegablack62]

I liked this very much. This will sound weird but I really liked how everyone is poised on a moment with a history and a future that will take them in different directions. You convey that each of the characters is on a trajectory that will be even more important than what happened in this story, but which doesn't diminish this story.

I liked the way you wrote Neville's decision to drop the sword. Many writers would have him say he couldn't stab Snape, but you convey it in a very powerful way that makes his decision seem to be the obvious correct one.

[quietliban]

Apologies for the lateness!

Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad that you enjoyed this. I think that this event was probably very important for all three characters even thought we may never know. :)

Thanks again.