This was a wonderful fic! I feel you got all of the characters spot on, and the fic itself is written very well. Such an interesting AU. I want to read more. * A *
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) haha, I'm not sure if I could add anything more to this; I'm all out of ideas. ^^; (... Unless I wanted to explore Fakir and Rue's newfound friendship or something. I dunno. XD;)
This was so bittersweet and so well written. Augh! I want to feel happy for Duck and Mytho, but I'm too busy feeling sorry for Rue and Fakir... And you know, this reads as a perfectly plausible ending as well. Great job!
Eep, I know, the whole time I was writing this I kept thinking "poor Fakir." DX And really? I didn't think this was IC enough to be considered as a plausible ending, but I'm really flattered you think so! Thank you for the comment~ ^^
I think you really captured the characters' voices, Fakir's especially! There's a lot of palpable sorrow in this piece, and I just get this lovely vision in my head of the sun setting by the lake. And the ending--love it!
I'm really glad to see your take on this alternate ending! Thanks for sharing!
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Such an interesting AU. I want to read more. * A *
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haha, I'm not sure if I could add anything more to this; I'm all out of ideas. ^^; (... Unless I wanted to explore Fakir and Rue's newfound friendship or something. I dunno. XD;)
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I think you really captured the characters' voices, Fakir's especially! There's a lot of palpable sorrow in this piece, and I just get this lovely vision in my head of the sun setting by the lake. And the ending--love it!
I'm really glad to see your take on this alternate ending! Thanks for sharing!
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