I loved how you captured Seamus' inner voice. All the self-doubt and torment.
And that Gryffindor kiss: It wasn’t particularly suave or smooth, but he put his heart into it. Nice!
I was right there with him when Lavender approached, not knowing what to expect. And then you surprised me with Lavender's choice. I love how she calls the shots.
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I loved how you captured Seamus' inner voice. All the self-doubt and torment.
And that Gryffindor kiss: It wasn’t particularly suave or smooth, but he put his heart into it. Nice!
I was right there with him when Lavender approached, not knowing what to expect. And then you surprised me with Lavender's choice. I love how she calls the shots.
Well Done!
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