Fanfic: Eyes Wide Shut (Quinn/Will) 1/1 R

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Eyes Wide Shut

Summary:AU: The fake-baby plan somehow went through perfectly. Beth (if she is even named Beth anymore) is adopted by Terri and Will still thinks he is the father.Quinn becomes somewhat a fixture in the Schuester household, but what happens when Terri runs off.

Pairing:Quinn/Will

Spoilers: Season One
Rating: Mature

Comments

[madmenfanatic]

I loved it! And you did a great job with the smut. :)

I do wish you had written this story in chapters; it's got a great premise that you could do a lot with. Instead of her blurting out the truth to Will and then running away for a few months. It didn't ring true that she would abandon Beth - not say goodbye to her and leaving Will without a nanny/babysitter. And not a very mature reaction either (running off and avoiding calls and texts).

Anyway, yes, I thought the ending was rushed, but I did love the story. And the idea that Terri and Will DID adopt the baby.

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I probably sound like an idiot, but it wasn't until after I had posted it I realized how rushed the ending was, but I had to have her tell him that way even though it was OOC was because truthfully, I had no thought on how to approach an actually sit-down between the two, and it was immature of her to run off, but she was under the delusion that he was in love with Terri, and it was only a couple weeks, because they had that little "hook-up" in the end of July and she would have been at CC about two weeks or so into August.

I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm sorry it was rushed at the end. I loved the prompt too, I just kinda wish someone else had wrote it lol :)

[flareonfury]

excellent job! ♥

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Thanks! I am actually thinking of doing a follow-up with a more satisfying ending and the reactions of the community.