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Jun 18, 2006 01:56

Alright... I'm struggling with this piece of work. I don't know if I like the Photograph better or the Digital Painting. They'd both be named "The Shrine" and I'm considering entering one of them into The Dirty Show.

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kliedel June 18 2006, 17:07:10 UTC
I like the new texture on the bubbles. They look much better. You've done a lot to the digital painting and now it's difficult to decide. Although personally, I like the birthmarks and the veins and lines in her skin, it doesn't seem right for the painting.

I think the digital painting has more of the fantasy the show might be looking for. Might I suggest adding just a tiny bit more shadow at the arm pit, and the collar bone. In the photo I think those elements help the viwer realize she's arching her back. They protrude because she's bending. Maybe a little in the bend of her neck too.

I think it's really coming along nicely. And I think you're right. After checking out the gallery of the dirty show, the photo might be a little too plain. It's hard to tell when something is simply stated or too plain. Fine lines.

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icegoddess June 19 2006, 21:46:05 UTC
i hate the painting. it's too cutesy. feels like bambi should pop out of the water and sing something.

what i like about the picture is that it's gritty and real. it may be simple, but that's something.

so yeah. my vote is for picture.

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