Staring Daggers (Sungyeol/Myungsoo)

Nov 06, 2011 15:43

Staring Daggers
Sungyeol/Myungsoo

Sungyeol doesn't get it. Myungsoo only kind of does.

To break up you have to actually date first. )

pair: sungyeol/myungsoo, (infinite), fic: staring daggers

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ibangyonggook November 6 2011, 08:59:47 UTC

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riiche November 8 2011, 16:12:39 UTC
Thank you for reading :D

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yeomin November 6 2011, 09:46:56 UTC
this is adorable and sweet and perfect.

“You know,” he says casually, “to break up you have to actually date first.”
how wise sungjong is. everyone should just listen to him.

It’s too cold tonight. Sungyeol absently wonders if it’s because Myungsoo isn’t curled up beside him for the first time in a long time.

Or it could just be the air-conditioning, he tells himself.
oh sungyeol. how adorable you are.

I could quote this whole fic, that's how much I like it.

“I don’t want to break up with you,” he says, and his voice is muffled but he knows Myungsoo hears him because his fingers curl into Sungyeol’s.

Myungsoo pokes him gently, and Sungyeol tilts his head slightly to see Myungsoo’s face beside his, eyelashes fluttering as their gazes meet. “…friends don’t break up.”
this has to be my favorite line though. my teeth are aching from the sweetness.

thank you for writing this ♥
this is going to be added to my memories.

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riiche November 8 2011, 16:16:04 UTC
Honestly your comment has me so relieved you don't even know! I've liked Infinite for awhile, but I've never actually written them before (what took me so long...?!). I'm so pleased you liked this. Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

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arashi1188 November 6 2011, 09:55:47 UTC
*le cries*
This was so...beautiful.

*still crying*

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riiche November 8 2011, 16:16:41 UTC
Aw, thank you! I'm happy you liked this. ♥

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rubyls November 6 2011, 10:24:33 UTC
askdjkljfkfkfjs i have no words, this was absolutely absolutely beautiful. just.... i really loved your sungyeol and your myungsoo, and even all the secondary characters, they were drawn out perfectly and there is literally just no flaw in this piece.

i really enjoyed this, i almost teared up when myungsoo said friends don't break up. your pace, prose, flow, everything was just so great ♥

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riiche November 8 2011, 16:19:16 UTC
I'm working to improve on my prose, but I'm glad everything flowed well for you. They're great fun to write (and even better to watch!) ......And oh, oh, I just noticed your icon. Why are they so cute? :(

Thank you for reading this! I appreciate it so much.

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specialises November 6 2011, 10:46:00 UTC
YOU WROTE INFINITE, OMG. ILU ;~~~; brb, reading.

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specialises November 7 2011, 02:21:19 UTC
ohmygod, why are you like this ): i don't even like myungyeol. how can you make them sound sosososo cute and ohmyheart ;~~~;

Myungsoo chuckles, but he wiggles out of Sungyeol’s grasp anyway, moving forward to walk with the happily yakking Woohyun.
/nods at you. because woohyun just talks so much that it's unnatural if he turns quiet all of a sudden. and flails, i love woohyun so much ):

Dongwoo isn’t the most handsome of fellows, but he’s roguishly good-looking and dependable. Not to mention everyone likes his kind, expressive nature and bright laughter - my laughter is bright too, Sungyeol tells himself stubbornly. He’s not used to thinking negatively like this, but surely the jealousy he feels in his gut is natural? Who doesn’t love Dongwoo?
ohmygod, your description of dongwoo is so totally spot on ;~~~;

Woohyun’s head lolls into Myungsoo’s chest, and Sungyeol feels a flash of irritation. He reaches over and smacks the top of Woohyun’s head. “For god’s sake, get off him, hyung.”my god. this is the cutest thing ever. woosooyeol ( ... )

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riiche November 8 2011, 16:24:43 UTC
I'm so grateful for your encouragement I can't thank you enough ;_; That said, I'm working on more Infinite stuff. Apart from DBSK and 2NE1, they're definitely my favourite group to write about at the moment. They're just flawless, I can't even pick a damn favourite. I've loved them since Nothing's Over, but jfc did they ruin me with their recent promotions auuuguhhh

You don't sound creepy at all, okay. :( I'm glad you left this comment! Thank you so much ♥

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