Inuyasha, "Sideline Victory" Kikyou/Naraku, PG

Jun 16, 2008 10:21

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Title: Sideline Victory
Rating: PG
Genre: Drama/Introspective
Warnings: None
AU/Canon: Canon
Pairing: Implied Naraku/Kikyou & Inuyasha/Kikyou.
Words: 307
Summary: If she can not be the hero, she at least accepts her part.
Note: I experimented with a bit of disjointed biography of Kikyou, just as a notice. Written for the "Acceptable ( Read more... )

kikyou, nar/kik, naraku/kikyou, 30shards, inuyasha

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landofthekwt June 16 2008, 16:07:18 UTC
Wonderful story. I love how she sees
the entire picture since she is no longer bound to one time and one body. She no longer needs vengeance and can wait forever for the one she loves.

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quirkysmuse June 16 2008, 16:53:00 UTC
Thank you!

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vexatively June 16 2008, 16:08:25 UTC
She lies until the Real End in her lover’s arms. Beautifully written.

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quirkysmuse June 16 2008, 16:53:16 UTC
Thanks so much!

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salomesensei June 23 2008, 22:05:06 UTC
Beautiful prose -- phrasing, language, style.
Focus on Kikyou's troubled POV and her role as catalyst are both compelling. Nicely done.

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quirkysmuse June 24 2008, 14:42:19 UTC
Thank you!

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anesther_reborn June 26 2008, 22:21:21 UTC
Wonderful way to capture the theme for Acceptable and your claim on Victory. I especially liked the way you had her know everything that will happen. A beautiful piece. :)

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quirkysmuse June 30 2008, 13:48:40 UTC
Thank you!

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