# 16

[teokki]

neon
exo & shinee ⥽ taemin/kai
it's as though jongin slips through taemin's fingers no matter what. inspired by john mayer's neon.

Comments

[subreadja]

I really liked this. The imagery was really lovely and the last line was perfect.
I don't think we could've done a better job playing it so I'm glad you wrote it. You did so perfectly.
*coughs*needsmorekissingtho*cough*

♥

[teokki]

thank you~

it was written, originally, with a proper make-out scene but it didn't seem proper. not enough thinking, so, maybe i'll find a way to edit it in.

[taepanda]

huwargh this is sho cute i cant asdfghjkl
and damn you jongin for being acing test even though u smoke ;~;

[aishiteruyuto23]

so much beautiful in such a simple story. ; u ;

[teokki]

thank you! ^^

[mylifegetoutw5]

Simple, but undeniably beautiful.

[life_not_knife]

I love how raw and real this feels with an edge of blurriness coming from Jongin. It's like everything is just so intese and real until Jongin moves closer and things become a little faded at the edges. I don't really know how best to explain it but it was beautifully written.

The way Taemin scrambles and runs out is so realistic too.

Love love loved this. Thanks for writing and sharing this.

Xx L xX