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[ersatzheartbeat]

Long time lurker, first time poster. Apologies in advance if the following fic is a little unrefined. Out of the blue, I woke up one morning with the urge to write something for Gippal and Rikku. Unfortunately I haven't played the game in ages or read/written fic for them in just as long. Still, I enjoyed writing this and hope you all might enjoy

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[icicle_streams]

I like this, it's not too cutesy and for once, they take things a bit slower in an easy-going relationship that's not all about the physicality. Your use of present-tense suits the pace and flow of the story, you have a good mix of longer and short sentences to add interest. Write some more rippal? :D