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[quix0tica]

Title: It Don't Seem Fair
Author: quix0tica
Pairing: Jordan Eberle/Taylor Hall
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: 100% not true.
Warnings: None.
Summary: Think: don't tell him, don't tell him, don't tell him. Don't tell him. Somehow manage to make it through days and weeks and months without telling your best friend you love him.
Notes: I found this writing style super

Comments

[belial]

I liked this. It's almost written as a stream-of-consciousness, and the set up's intense yet awkward yet perfect.

Well done!

[quix0tica]

I honestly seriously think it's physically impossible for these boys to not be awkward, so. Thank you for reading it!

[maniaco]

Loved it!

[quix0tica]

Thank you~ <3

[ice_baby_09]

I love this kind of narrative! Also, I love how you describe Hallsy's feelings and how he has to hide them and pretend. Perfect :)

[quix0tica]

Bahaha, Hallsy has all the feelings! All of them. Mostly about Ebs. Thanks!

[tidal_waves16]

I love it when people experiment with writing styles, and i love it even more when the result is as amazing as this :D

[quix0tica]

Ahhh, thank you so much! That means a lot, I'm super glad you liked it. (:

[quix0tica]

Thank you! I was going for interesting, so~
(: