there was a time when I might have written something like that, but it is quite a ways behind me. If you say he means it, I guess you know what you're talking about, but to an outsider it comes off corny to the point of being satirical. I guess this perspective comes from having written a lot, and read so many of my own words that just seemed like junk later.. that I don't reach for the gooey metaphors to explain my feelings anymore. I think I can flatter and praise well enough without that, now.
So he told you to hide it, then he insisted you post it?? Sounds like he decided he wanted to announce himself to that other guy.
Well, telling the other guy off can sometimes be dangerous....
anonymous
January 18 2005, 01:29:21 UTC
I don't mean to be so presumptuous as to say that the young man she is currently attached to may have read her live journal, and may not have been amused. On the other hand, if he were, he would be steaming under the collar, and would not have sent a small piece of literature to a certain jaded young lady. *hint hint* =)
As it stands, he was actually quite enlightened as to the nature of one of the glacial lady's altruistic admirers, but not in a combustible manner. It did, however cause him to wonder about how flattered the lady would be if he himself were to write one. =)
However, what would I know. I am only an anonymous party. Meow. =)
Re: Well, telling the other guy off can sometimes be dangerous....quixotic_poisonJanuary 18 2005, 02:50:37 UTC
:D oh really... I supose that would be so... but that is besides the point is it not?... So would this ananoymous party happen to know exactly where that piece of covete literature is? I know of a certain "Glaciel" mistress who' very much appreciate such artistry... and as for a possible letter... She welcomes them with open arms... as always.
a declaration of love was meant to be read by all
anonymous
January 18 2005, 19:03:18 UTC
that letter was a declaration of undying love. as cleche as it may have sounded, it was a result of being true to myself and "being the hopeless romantic and the modern day romeo that i used to be so proud of being". yes i did tell her that i wanted no one to read it, and yes i did tell her that no one could know about it. and the honest reason that i did tell her to post it was not to irritate her present young man, not at all. i simply wanted everyone that i could to know how i feel about this gorgeous young lady. i think that it may have made a lot of ppl jealous on the inside to say the least, but thats just conjecture. yes, i know it was corny, yes i know that it was cleche, but that is besides the point. i poured my heart and soul into that letter(btw i should probly state that i never write letters, i havent since high school. let alone spending two weeks trying to make one perfect), and i really dont give a damn about what anyone thinks of me or it. i love this woman whether or not she loves me. and to me thats all
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Re: a declaration of love was meant to be read by allquixotic_poisonJanuary 19 2005, 13:37:49 UTC
First of all since when have i EVER chewed someone up and spit them out? Second while yes the letter may be a bit corny, think for one second about the person to whom he's writing this letter to... I LOVE corny stuff, and the mythological/ astrological reference to Andromeda and Perseus happens to be right up my ally... By him putting that stuff in the letter, it showed me that he actually payed attention to me in high school, and my still very profound appitite for that genre of life... not to mention that while he got a couple of details wrong in the letter, it shows that he really poured over this letter for some time... He's not the most articulae person in the world and were you to ask him, he'd freely admit it
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Re: a declaration of love was meant to be read by allgirliespeedraceJanuary 19 2005, 15:38:24 UTC
chewed someone up & spit them out? think Rito... not only was he older & more experienced than you he was also candace's ex (for shame).... but I'm not mad at ya...
Anyways do I happen to know this starstruck gentleman? thinking of people pushing you away 4 years ago I'm thinking Leon... if it's him then I take back any and all mean things I've said and I would kill you if you didn't marry him and make nookie so there'd be more beautiful munchkins in the family... (hahahaha! j/k...or am I?)
Anyways gotta run to work, only got one job but they work me like it's two... lol!
so you think that im a poor poor bastard huh? well i guess you might be right on some levels, but soooo soooo wrong on many others. sure i may be out of my league, but what the hell does it matter. this young lady is a wonderful wonderful girl, and i appreciate her more than i think a lot of ppl do. at this very moment, ive accepted the fact that she is a friend(one who i intend to keep for as long as i possibly can), and as i said before"i love her whether she loves me or not". sure im living in a dream world, but why should it matter to anyone else. i havent been nearly as jaded as about 95% of the ppl that i know, so i suppose that i have a right to be the way i am. the young lady and i have an understanding that whatever it is that i am dreaming may never happen, so its not like im under the impression that were going to have some fairy tale ending. oh and by the way, just because my spelling and sentence structure isnt exactly "on par" with the rest of the PHD's doesnt mean that im an idiot. there is a difference between
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I've got nothing against you; don't know very much about you, even. It's not so much what I think about you or it. You don't know me. Me flaming you on the internet wouldn't and shouldn't count for anything. I'm just reacting to something that puzzles me, and hoping maybe my comments can help you in future romances
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I think if he really took 2 weeks trying to perfect it and that's what he ended up with then we should give him an A for effort but like a C for execution, what d'you think?
(excuse me, am I being a bitch? Kind of a side effect of someone telling me to "F**k off" whether it's deserved or not)
I never said you were lazy hun, didn't mean any offense by it, but I'm not exactly a person that cares whether offense was given or taken my anyone other than myself.
I love my sister dearly I just know that the women in our family inadvertently collect hearts then step on them, not necessarily on purpose it just happens. So sorry to speak the truth when it's there to be spoken, that's just how I am.
The english thing is just a pet peeve of mine, I hate typos (makes it kind of hard to read her journal, but I soothe myself by hoping she's just doing it on purpose to irk me.
My husband's grammar & punctuation leave much to be desired, it doesn't mean I don't love him, I was just saying that it's nice that you spent so much time trying to perfect your letter and I was joking that maybe it didn't come out so perfect because of certain spelling errors present in your online post.
Maybe the underdog will get the girl, doubt it, but maybe...
Re: one last jibegirliespeedraceJanuary 20 2005, 01:05:08 UTC
i wasnt trying to tell you to f**k off. i was simply stating that i didnt care what anyone else thought of me. i know that im not the most "educated" or whatever word it is that im looking for(toy would know), but thats ok. i still consider myself a decent person and am happy with who i am. and i also didnt say you called me lazy, i was stating that myself. i was saying that im just a lazy bastard when it comes to that stuff. theres a lot that i dont know about this online acronym hotkey whatever stuff. i thought that btw meant by the way, but i guess that i was wrong. oh and i didnt know that you were related to the young lady, if i did then i wouldnt have been as surprised. i guess that explains y you make me look like a 1st grade student in the grammar dept. no biggie.
oh and im actually 20 years old. will be turning 21 in may
Re: one last jibequixotic_poisonJanuary 20 2005, 10:45:23 UTC
you won't figure it out... not unless one of us tell you... TRUST me on that one.. and you are correct it's not Leon... Leon is 4 1/2 months younger than me... (the youngest person i've ever dated, unless my memory is serving me wrong)
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there was a time when I might have written something like that, but it is quite a ways behind me. If you say he means it, I guess you know what you're talking about, but to an outsider it comes off corny to the point of being satirical. I guess this perspective comes from having written a lot, and read so many of my own words that just seemed like junk later.. that I don't reach for the gooey metaphors to explain my feelings anymore. I think I can flatter and praise well enough without that, now.
So he told you to hide it, then he insisted you post it?? Sounds like he decided he wanted to announce himself to that other guy.
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As it stands, he was actually quite enlightened as to the nature of one of the glacial lady's altruistic admirers, but not in a combustible manner. It did, however cause him to wonder about how flattered the lady would be if he himself were to write one. =)
However, what would I know. I am only an anonymous party. Meow. =)
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Anyways do I happen to know this starstruck gentleman? thinking of people pushing you away 4 years ago I'm thinking Leon... if it's him then I take back any and all mean things I've said and I would kill you if you didn't marry him and make nookie so there'd be more beautiful munchkins in the family... (hahahaha! j/k...or am I?)
Anyways gotta run to work, only got one job but they work me like it's two... lol!
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(excuse me, am I being a bitch? Kind of a side effect of someone telling me to "F**k off" whether it's deserved or not)
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I love my sister dearly I just know that the women in our family inadvertently collect hearts then step on them, not necessarily on purpose it just happens. So sorry to speak the truth when it's there to be spoken, that's just how I am.
The english thing is just a pet peeve of mine, I hate typos (makes it kind of hard to read her journal, but I soothe myself by hoping she's just doing it on purpose to irk me.
My husband's grammar & punctuation leave much to be desired, it doesn't mean I don't love him, I was just saying that it's nice that you spent so much time trying to perfect your letter and I was joking that maybe it didn't come out so perfect because of certain spelling errors present in your online post.
Maybe the underdog will get the girl, doubt it, but maybe...
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Who puts "getting laid" in a love letter? Especially when you're talking about sleeping with someone other than the person you're writing to?
I could understand if you said that making love to her was...[fill in the blank]
Or if it was just a CFM letter and you were talking about some freaky stuff you guys had done together (BTW means Come F*ck Me)..
But in a declaration of "undying love" why would you put that?
Ok that's all for me now...
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oh and im actually 20 years old. will be turning 21 in may
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