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FIC: Suits; In Which Harvey Deludes Himself into Thinking that He Doesn't Care

Aug 27, 2011 21:45

Fill for this prompt at suitsmeme: I know it's been done before, and done well, but could we have another fic where Mike is ill and Harvey takes care of him? :) G-PG, definitely.
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!fandom: suits, !!fanfic

Comments 17

metralha August 28 2011, 02:25:47 UTC

I was the anon prompting this and I couldn't be happier with the result. Wonderful, wonderful.
Harvey and Mike feel so in character and the ending was so sweet. I only hope you continue to write lots of more suits fic.
Thank you! :)

quixyjie August 28 2011, 12:55:33 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked it :) Couldn't have done it without your prompt.

phreakycat August 28 2011, 05:47:02 UTC

This was just wonderful! So, so great! Really in character for both, and your Harvey voice is just SPOT ON. Not too harsh, not too soft, just the perfect blend of HARVEY. The H/C was also so well balanced - touching and satisfying without being overdone. Poor Mike! I just love how Harvey fought against giving in to his concern but was ultimately helpless to leave Mike to his fate. And the end... I seriously AWWWWW'd out loud. It was understated but said SO MUCH - you managed to tell almost a whole other story in just the final paragraph. This went right in my "favorites" bookmark folder! Thanks so much for sharing, and I hope you keep writing such wonderful fic for the fandom!

quixyjie August 28 2011, 12:59:34 UTC

Your comment just made me grin like the Cheshire Cat. No joke. :D It's so encouraging!! Also, I don't think anyone would have been able to leave Mike to his fate - how can you leave that face alone? YOU CAN'T.

Thanks so so much for reading - I'm so glad you liked it!

slashfanatic22 August 28 2011, 06:00:05 UTC

AWWWWW! This was done perfectly! It's sweet without being sappy and still very much in character! I literally "aww"-ed out loud reading the "Take medicine, puppy"

This was adorable! I loved it! :D

quixyjie August 28 2011, 13:00:29 UTC

Thanks! It was difficult trying to keep it on the sane side of sappy hahaha. Glad you liked it! ♥

hope_calaris August 28 2011, 09:34:02 UTC

That was a fantastic read and felt very much in character.

Thanks for sharing!

quixyjie August 28 2011, 13:01:33 UTC

Thanks for reading! :) Now, I would like to add my fist to the fist-bump party going on in your icon.

kimna August 29 2011, 06:10:43 UTC

Oh, my heart. It is so full. Those last few sentences will leave me smiling like an idiot for days, thinking about how secretly sweet Harvey was to sick!Mike. So much love for this fill. ♥

And can I just say I love the Donna-moments? Just like in canon, they're so fleeting yet awesome. Her line to Mike about quarter-sized rings (which is made even better since it's Harvey who imagines her saying it) and later that incredible line: Donna had fixed him with this glare that clearly stated, I have better, more glamorous things to do with my time, and Mike Ross certainly isn’t my little pet project, and then she had said the words anyway. I love that!

Thank you for this perfection~

quixyjie August 29 2011, 13:43:36 UTC

Oh wow thank you so much for your comments! I'm glad you enjoyed this :) Donna is definitely one of my favorites to write because she's just so awesome; it's hard for anything that comes out of her mouth to be bland.