I loved your story--the tone, the premise, everything. I'm not exactly sure what it reads like to me (I know the style is reminiscient of something, but can't recall what) but it is beautiful. Very subdued, matter-of-fact; cleanly poetic.
I think it has that same wistful, nostalgic tone, but Krauss' style is markedly different; she's more stream-of-consciousness, whereas Bender is sort of like Garcia-Marquez in how concise and natural her prose is.
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I loved it too, I'm looking for more of her works ♥ Something about the surreal always resounds with me.
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I think it has that same wistful, nostalgic tone, but Krauss' style is markedly different; she's more stream-of-consciousness, whereas Bender is sort of like Garcia-Marquez in how concise and natural her prose is.
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♥ stay strong.
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Thank you ♥ You're always so kind. :)
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I love it very much too, and thank you~ :) Did we decide the actual dates for the San Fran trip?
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As are yours ♥
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