[HnG/PoT] The Break of Day (R)

Dec 28, 2007 21:52

Title: The Break of Day (sequel to Kids These Days and All Manner of SuspicionsAuthor: Kimmie ( Read more... )

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caelestin December 29 2007, 03:22:55 UTC
When I first read the intro I admit I was all sorts of @_@, being a fan of both fandoms.

But but but!

It's so amazing! You are amazing! *has read the previous parts, too* I liked how Tezuka appreciated the way Ogata treated him according to his age and I was very much amused at the tidbits about Tezuka's family. I don't usually read fics with Tezuka paired with other people, but this won me over. Will there be more? :3 *big shiny puppy eyes*

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mmmdraco December 29 2007, 03:48:53 UTC
It does seem like almost every Hikago fan is also a Tenipuri fan, so I figured I wasn't taking too big a risk in combining these two fandoms. The actual pairing still shocks me a bit, though.

I may attempt more of this, but no guarantees. So far, no ideas have really bitten me, but that doesn't mean that someone won't inspire one at some point.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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aishuu December 29 2007, 04:02:35 UTC
You're writing these quicker than I can review!

I like the evolving feel of this - and the humor. Touya and Shindou not only knowing tennis, but being pretty good (the black eye is HYSTERICAL), the "be prepared" bit and in general the give-and-take. And Ogata isn't coming across as evil or manipulative, just... Ogata.

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mmmdraco December 29 2007, 22:45:52 UTC
I started writing an AU AkiHika last night... one that might just consume me for the rest of the year, at least, so we'll see if I write any more of this universe. I think I'd like to... just to flesh it out a bit more, but I don't know yet.

Thank you for reading. ^_^

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issen4 December 29 2007, 14:39:22 UTC
Woo! So Touya and Shindou know tennis? To play doubles? Yes! *pumps fist*

Tezuka's rather perky here; I'm a bit surprised about that, but otherwise this is really enjoyable. The part with Kuwabara is fun too. ^^

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mmmdraco December 29 2007, 22:39:55 UTC
Yes, they know some tennis. Just, like Tezuka's go, not nearly enough to be much of a threat to Tezuka. (To Ogata, however...)

I was trying to picture a Tezuka who had been getting out and doing stuff with Ogata for months and finally coming into being who he was. He turned out, well, kinda perky. Tezuka as a character feels kind of stagnant in fandom, and I hate writing him as only solemn and responsible. He *is* still a kid, no matter what, and those things have to hit him at some point. The puberty in his brain has to catch up to his body sometime. ^_^

Glad you're still liking this. I may come back to it at some point, but I've got another project on the table at the moment, so we'll see.

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xenocide_now December 30 2007, 02:46:14 UTC
I must admit this crossover has been rather enjoyable. Those two are my favorite characters from both fandoms and seeing them together was breaking my brain and making me squee, interchangably. My only problem with this AU is that while your Ogata is perfectly in character - some of the stuff he does/says made me squee out loud - your Tezuka isn't what I had thought he would be. Somehow I cannot see Tezuka being so forward and daring about being intimate, no matter how much he changed for Ogata. Frankly, I think it would be Fuji to behave like that =P (and I am NOT thinking thoughts of Ogata/Fuji AU... NOT at all) >.<;;;

Either way, I enjoyed this fic. It was cute! =)

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mmmdraco December 30 2007, 12:56:49 UTC
For one, it's been years since I've written Tezuka, or even acquainted myself with canon. Yet, at the same time, I've still written a *lot* of Tezuka fic. Tezuka is so stoic and calm and "buchou" throughout the series that we never see inside. I've always seen him as having these giant walls in place that no one could see past, and in this I explored him potentially getting beyond them. Yes, it's a departure from his usual temperment. But, Tezuka is young, and still capable of drastic mental change. Ogata? Some, but not so much.

But, thank you for reading!

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aiwritingfic December 31 2007, 02:33:36 UTC
Sorry I'm so late--I was eaten by life!

*snuggles you* I'm really happy you wrote Tezuka and Ogata together, and I'm proud to have put the bunny in your head. Your Tezuka is different from mine and not how I'd see him, but oh, Ogata. ♥ ^_^ Thank you for the hot yummy goodness. In fact, if I ever write any Ogata/Tezuka (thanks to you), I know who to blame! XD

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mmmdraco December 31 2007, 03:22:38 UTC
You'd *better* write Ogata/Tezuka. After I angsted so much? You owe me! ^_^ And then we'll have started the hot new pairing that *everyone* wants to read and write.

Also, I am currently working on an entirely different fic that is all your fault. This one I'm not angsting about, though, so I don't mind. *grin*

I don't mind the lateness at all. ^_^

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aiwritingfic December 31 2007, 03:41:17 UTC
*giggles and snuggles you* Maybe. *hearts* I'll be sure to blame you for it, count on that!

Oooh, are you writing cake-fic? *squee* Again I am happy to take the blame for the bunny, and I look forward to reading it! *happy bouncing*

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