Cute...very cute. Loved it. I love how you portray Takumi and Ryousuke, it's perfectly in sync and how the two characters interact is brilliant. You're one of the few writer's out there that can get Takumi's character just right so that he doesn't come out stupid and dull, just a bit slow and a bit unsure of himself.
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Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed! ^_^
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