Title: Woman King Fandom: Fire Emblem 6 Genre: Angst Rating, Warnings: PG for a hint of violence and some disturbing content. What part of it is disturbing to you may vary. Word Count: ~500 Summary: Zephiel tries to make it right. Not AU
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Just wanted to say I love how your notes are longer than the piece of writing. But. I can't say I blame you. I have done that before...at least a few times. Heh.
I had a conversation with blacklacelily that went something like this:
Me: DO I COME ACROSS AS DEFENSIVE IN THESE NOTES? Lily: No... but I think the fact that you wrote 800 words of notes for a 500 word piece is defensive. Me: Touche.
Well, generally I would say that if you feel it needs explained that badly, the piece itself wasn't obvious enough. But then I read the notes and was like...well they're not too explanatory.
Mostly I think the entire thing could be summed up with, "Zephiel identifies as a woman."
And then maybe a short explanation on why that's not AU-- because it's perfectly possible in canon that he could be identifying as a woman. It's not like anyone would know. ;)
...But I have written EXTENSIVE notes on some stories that were uhh longer than the story itself! Why? I have no idea. Probably was defending myself.
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Me: DO I COME ACROSS AS DEFENSIVE IN THESE NOTES?
Lily: No... but I think the fact that you wrote 800 words of notes for a 500 word piece is defensive.
Me: Touche.
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Mostly I think the entire thing could be summed up with, "Zephiel identifies as a woman."
And then maybe a short explanation on why that's not AU-- because it's perfectly possible in canon that he could be identifying as a woman. It's not like anyone would know. ;)
...But I have written EXTENSIVE notes on some stories that were uhh longer than the story itself! Why? I have no idea. Probably was defending myself.
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I think I'm probably paranoidly imagining that people are more against the idea than they really are.
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