Comments | r_tenou: the ungrateful dwarf (6/7)

r_tenou

the ungrateful dwarf (6/7)

Dec 09, 2011 00:17

( Arashi fic... )

fanfic: arashi

Comments 17

bleedingliar17 December 9 2011, 08:13:40 UTC

Aww~
This seems cute!!
I love the story so far =]

r_tenou December 10 2011, 19:47:09 UTC

Thank you! ^___^ So glad you like it.

harunomasu December 9 2011, 08:58:54 UTC

LOL Is the dwarf and the angel somewhat related? I really think they do~ Is Snow White and Rose Red a fairytail too? I've never heard of it O.o

r_tenou December 10 2011, 19:48:33 UTC

Are the dwarf and the angel related? I wonder...

It is a real fairy tale. http://www.bartleby.com/17/2/42.html You can read it here if you like, but don't be surprised if my version is a little (or a lot) different. <3

Thanks for reading!!

harunomasu December 11 2011, 14:25:52 UTC

Oh, thanks for the link! Will save it to read later on :D

nekochan_lia December 9 2011, 11:43:24 UTC

Omg
I ♥ your fic so much
Maximum kawaii xD
And I miss panda-san (whom I guess is satoshi xD)

r_tenou December 10 2011, 19:50:10 UTC

Thanks so much! XD I'm thinking Panda-san will definitely be back in the next chapter (mostly because it's the last...) :P So glad you like it!!

arara_chan December 9 2011, 19:37:51 UTC

Yay a new chapter!
I liiike it <3
I wonder what's the secret about this ''angel'' :D
The next one is the last chapter?? O.O Doesn't seem like the end at all! xD I wonder what'll happen~ :)
Thanks for sharing!

r_tenou December 10 2011, 19:51:23 UTC

Yup. Next will be the last. XD I hope you'll like it!

Thanks for reading. <3

deelovesryo December 10 2011, 00:57:13 UTC

Lol, there are so many wonderful scenes that I'm not going to quote, but the scene of the making and flying of the kite with all their boyish excitement. The one of the eagle, when you disclose that the aim is the dwarf and not some animal like I thought, all the fighting and all Nino's remarks are really funny. Then the scene of Masaki hugging the dwarf and so so cute Jun's speech when his tongue slipped and yeah, I think the same as him, starring eyes, perfect hands and much more. And then dear Masaki sharing the few, poor things he has with the angel, Oooh! how I wish they can talk at last!
As always great work, thank you! love it!

r_tenou December 10 2011, 19:58:07 UTC

Boyish excitement. <3 This is why I love writing Nino and Aiba together. They're always so much fun. Writing this fic, all the characters seemed to just fall into place, those two especially. I'm so glad you liked this chapter. It was one of my favorites to write - possibly because it's the one before the last. :P

Thanks so much for such a wonderful, detailed comment. It really makes my day. XD