[fic] Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi - SJM - The Path Untraveled - Chapter 9/9

Jan 03, 2015 15:49

Title: The Path Untraveled
Author: fonulyn
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi
Other characters: side!Han Geng/Heechul, Ryeowook, Sungmin, Siwon, a lot of brief mentions of others (suju and shinee, mainly)
Warnings: (overall) blood and violence, hunting etc.
Wordcount: ~37k
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty imagination.
Summary: For as long ( Read more... )

pairing: han geng/heechul, pairing: kyuhyun/zhou mi, rating: nc17, length: multichapter, type: au, author: fonulyn, character: siwon, character: ryeowook, character: sungmin, verse: wolves

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iluvsuju95 January 3 2015, 20:24:13 UTC
Nooooo its overrrr.... wowow such a great story i enjoyed this really much....a sequel would be really really perfect haha...thanks again for giving us qmi fans something to read <3 admiring the authors that never stop posting stories even when the fandom is almost disappear ;;

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fonulyn January 4 2015, 10:05:25 UTC
I'm glad to hear you liked this! haha I'm going to give the sequel a try, no promises but I'll try! ;D awh and you're so very welcome. Thank you for reading!

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shineekitten January 4 2015, 06:59:01 UTC
EFWGRYHTRJYTHYGRDEFSWDENRGDBFSVRGETHRGNBDFVSDFE THIS ENDING WAS SOOOOO GOOOOOOOD BUT IM STILL SO SAD COS ITS OVEEEEER

tbh i would be interested in learning more about the shadow people like they kinda just show up n try to kill them but seemed so ill-prepared i kinda wanna know what their motive for attacking was (if there was any motive at all, even). but whatevers this ending was still satisfying enough (chaptered fics kinda need a satisfying ending unlike a oneshot which can be left as open as one likes cos its cruel but theres little obligation lmao)~

AND KYU WENT WITH HIIIIM IM SO HAPPY (i would have also been just as happy if they had both stayed kekeke) FEWGRFDHTGR

IDEK WHAT ELSE I CAN SAY TBH ITS JUST SO GOOD OKAY <33333333333333333333

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fonulyn January 4 2015, 10:09:05 UTC
asdfgkj at least it was good? ;; I know the feeling tho.

that's what I had a slight problem with tbh bc I wasn't sure if I should give more info on the shadow ppl but the thing is, they didn't know anything about them?? so in order to introduce them more to the readers I would've had to switch to the shadow pov or smth and it would've included another 10k and the fic would be finished in like 2034 8) lmao, idk, I hoped it was sufficient as is. after all, the whole pack was left clueless too as to what caused it all. BUT I'M RAMBLING.

thank you for reading sweetie!!♥ much appreciated ;;♥

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shineekitten January 4 2015, 11:02:42 UTC
IT WAS SOOOO GOOD~!!!! fegrthgfhffd like i seriously enjoyed it~~~

waah dont worry i kinda rambled mysellf tbh lmao. i was kinda thinking "outload" with my curiosities n stuff. it does make sense tho that there was no explanation because (as you said) it was all from the wolf's point of view~. i will probably continue to imagine the reasons tho just for my own amusement~ kekekeke

and you're so very welcome dear~ <33333 muchly deserved~

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fonulyn January 4 2015, 13:30:52 UTC
I'M SO RELIVED thank you ;;

haha rambling is so easy to do XD it's not like it's bad tho, really. and yes do continue to imagine the reasons, by all means ;D IF I end up writing that sequel I might be able to touch upon the subject there, but it's still so much in the planning stage that I'm not sure if it'll happeeeeen ;;;;

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anonymous January 7 2015, 00:37:31 UTC
Is this the end? Are you sure THIS is the end??

OMG I have so many questions! But I won't ask any of them because you said the magic word: SEQUEL. And you know me... I could be bugging you forever until you write it muahahaha

I loved it, sweetie. Each part of the fic, tbh. Poor Mimi could not fight, but I am glad Kyuhyun stayed with him, felt the need to do so. Same thing for leaving with him, leaving his own pack behind. The bond is so strong between them and you explained it beautifully.

I feel so sad this is over. As I said, I have many questions and I would love to read 10 chapters more and then another 20. I love this universe and I really hope you go back to it someday.

And I will be waiting to read, of course.

Thanks for the story, Jojo! ♥

Eva

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fonulyn January 31 2015, 19:04:39 UTC
haha yes I'm sure this is the end XD I'm sorry if it wasn't to your satisfaction! and I am still thinking of the sequel but I'd need a proper plot for it before getting to it since all I have for now are little snippets and thoughts about it. buuuuuuut let's see ;D I'll try.

awh but I'm so glad you enjoyed!!♥ if it wasn't for you this fic truly wouldn't exist ;; and I'm so happy that you found their bond tangible and the explanations working!

I'd love to write 10 chapters more, honestly, but recently (...for the past year haha) writing somehow isn't as easy as it used to be so I'm afraid that much won't happen D: but the universe was such a pleasure to work with, I'd love to play in it more.

thank you sweetie ♥ and I'm so so sorry for such a late reply, idk if you'll even see this anymore ;;

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angelbrey January 7 2015, 04:01:28 UTC
Love love love this so much!
I really want to know what happens to hangeng's pack though!
And somehow, I just love how siwon and hangeng was so willing to let kyuhyun go/accept kyuhyun! <3
QMi for life~~~

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fonulyn January 31 2015, 19:05:52 UTC
thank you so much!! i'm glad you enjoyed it :D it's so nice to hear that you liked reading it~~

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oldroadtoavalon January 7 2015, 18:27:17 UTC
i'm so sad it's over ;__________; and this is my third time reading ejdekowdoedpkweo
i'm really glad you decided to push through and finish this and post it, jojo, i'm really proud of you ;A;

i like how you focused mainly on qmi's bond, how it almost literally erased everything else BUT zhou mi for kyuhyun. before his pack, before his own life, come zhou mi's safety, there's not even a grain of doubt in his mind. i guess that's why his decision to leave in the end (besides all the reasons i have told you on skype, in my 'essay about kyu' :B) makes so much sense: zhou mi is his home and he has his heart.

i hope they find the rest of their pack and i hope they're mostly alive diweokdowpdwe
(and i hope we get to see them and minkey together what do you think *hint hint nudge nudge* eojoerkopfrelfpe

thank you so much for this, jojo
it was a wonderful experience ;-;
<3

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fonulyn January 31 2015, 19:09:19 UTC
third time awh bb i'm so glad you're not fed up with it yet ;; ahh and i'm a bit sad it's over too, but at the same time sorta glad as well x) it was a ton of work and problems, but it was also enjoyable and i love these characters and this verse ;;

your essays on skype made my day, they still do♥ as does your comment! asdfghkjn i'm so late in replying I don't even know what to say anymore without sounding silly, but just, thank you so so so much! for your help and for your support and for your comments and asdfg everything ♥

ilu♥

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