Fanfiction

[airgid_chead]

Title: In the Eye of the Viewfinder
Characters: Ritsuka, Soubi and others
Rating: T
Summary: Twenty-one-year-old Ritsuka works as a photographer. Sometimes, he does a scoop for the police with his friend, Keita, despite his fighter's protests. One day, they get the scoop of their lives: nailing one of the most dangerous yakuza in Japan.

Comments

[crowncomposer]

"I need a fix of challenge, of expanding mu authority" Typo! May be others; I was reading pretty quickly.

"(he rationalised that the fact Ritsuka had decided to lie didn't necessarily mean he was in grave danger)" Dramatic irony FTW.

I'm a little surprised Seimei would be smoking-lung cancer and all. Then again, I'm surprised he managed to move on from his "Ritsuka and I are the only 2 people in the world" mentality. Geez, now that I think about it, Loveless needs to be re-titled: "Loveless: An Encyclopedia of Mental Disorders and How to Aggravate Them". :P

As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm wondering how Keita's going to get out of this mess, as well as how much ass Soubi's going to kick.

[airgid_chead]

I'm sorry if there are more, I always re-read my fics before I post them but I rarely spot them anyway :( Maybe I should look for a beta, but then, I don't write enough to bother anyone... Thanks for well, careful reading

[crowncomposer]

Well...now I feel bad. I wasn't even reading that carefully! :O Maybe I should go back and give it a second glance... I'm moving into my college dorm this week (well, more like packing for it, and then actually moving in next week), but once all of this craziness dies down, and if you still feel you need one, I wouldn't mind beta-ing

[airgid_chead]

You feel bad? I feel bad! Not a careful reading and a typo already XD The piece may not withstand a second glance ;) Really? That's a great offer :) But, as you probably already know, most of my fics are Beloved-oriented, do you like them enough to read about them

[cciurlizza]

One word: brilliant! Keep it up! :)

[airgid_chead]

One word: Thanks XD More is coming up soon :)