There's Something About Colby (Don's POV)

[radfiction]

Title: There's Something About Colby
Series/Chapter: Getting Here (4/?)
Author: radfiction
Pairing: Charlie/Colby
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3869
Summary:: Don remembers Colby's early days.
Feedback: Yes, please!
Warnings: A little more dialog - and a flashback inside a flashback...
Main Story Setting: Season 3 between The Mole and The Janus List
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Comments

[lives_to_learn]

well done, can't wait for more!

Thanks.

[radfiction]

More on the way. But, probably not from Don's POV.

[devo79]

Nice. Hope to see more soon :)

Thanks

[radfiction]

thanks for reading and commenting.

[rambler75]

I liked that :)

[radfiction]

Thanks! I enjoyed writing it, but feel more comfortable inside Colby's head than Don's. I think I'll try Charlie next, though....

[rambler75]

Don't get lost in the numbers. :)

[ladygray99]

Very nice. This "Donald Eppes Universe of Athletics, was somewhere around synchronized swimming in terms of status." That just made me laugh out loud.

And I really liked this from Don's POV. It filled in some gaps and showed that Colby wasn't the only one who was paying attention in those early days.

And can I just say that your writing style is improving with each chapter as well.

THANKS!!!

[radfiction]

I think I laughed out loud when I thought of synchronized swimming, too.

I had to write from Don's POV to show that others are paying attention - and that Colby's not perfect - close, but not perfect, in his assessments of situations.

And thanks for the kind words about improvement. That's what happens with constructive feedback, more practice, and good role models!!!