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radiate86

The 'C' Word

Dec 12, 2005 22:59

This is the short story that I wrote for my Creative Writing class. It's 8 pages, therefore, I don't really expect more than one or two people to actually read it. I just thought I'd put it out there, since it is largely autobiographical. I'll let you know at the end what isn't. The tone of it is very dry and there is essentially no central ( Read more... )

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radiate86 December 13 2005, 05:04:50 UTC

I love airports, too!! Seriously, haha.

And yeah...my cousin ate pasta for breakfast, lunch, and dinner everyday of her life until she found out that she was allergic, so they had to teach her to eat other things. Weird, I know. But she was hospitalized for 3 months.

Love you, too! Maybe when you get back to Boston we can hang out. I'll be there until the end of January. And I owe you such a long email.

wow... anonymous December 13 2005, 06:32:04 UTC

annie that made me cry. i love you and all your talent as a writer. i hope that just because of this story you make millions and buy a house in california, which is where i remember you said you wanted to live after school. i know i already said i love you, but i do. always.

love
ali

Re: wow... radiate86 December 13 2005, 18:49:36 UTC

Thanks Ali. I love you, too. And you can come visit me in Cali, haha. :)

hey anonymous December 13 2005, 06:39:46 UTC

that story was amazing
you are an awesome writer and i know it must of been hard sharing something personal like that

ps-dont be mad that i read it

annie nicolemarie129 December 13 2005, 08:47:42 UTC

there is absolutely nothing i can say to you right now that you don't already know. but i will say the one thing that i always say to you and decided i don't say it enough: i love you.

and, yes, i was serious i will have your children.

love youuuu

Re: annie radiate86 December 13 2005, 18:50:00 UTC

I LOVE YOU! Children are a must.

thatgirljackie December 13 2005, 14:29:24 UTC

Dear Annie,

I love you.

Sincerely, Jackie

radiate86 December 13 2005, 18:50:18 UTC

I love you, too!!

well i'm probably the last person you thought would read that, but... pl2incesskl December 14 2005, 22:33:36 UTC

let's try to wipe the *weird* face off.

fantastic... and by fantastic I mean, thought and emotion provoking, all-to-easy to relate to, and overall well written.

i hope things are going well (that finals aren't being TOO much of a pain in the ass and whatnot) for you, and hope that you holiday is filled with gifts (not materialistic ones, just b/c that would ruin the point) as great as your talent expressed in your post.

KL