I'm honestly amazed by how well your Jaye is. ^__^ And I love Sharon's inner monologue: so naturally every idiot with a car had parked illegally in the firm’s parking lot. Ah, perfect.
I'm completely loving your Jaye. I haven't seen the show in a little while but her voice comes straight into my head when I start reading. Also, yay for Captain Jack!
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and oh, captain jack is SO MUCH FUN. heh. i <3 writing him.
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