A Hunter's Fire

[radioactivefox]

It wasn’t so long after the release of Harbors of Memory that James realized something was changing. The way Gabrielle didn’t look at him when she came in the room, but sat staring at him studiously when she thought he didn’t notice. Or Penny sitting in a corner, nursing a bottle of whiskey, and pretending that she wasn’t crying in the sleeve of

Comments

[plentyofzest]

Good. But why is there no green grass in CA and NY? Do you mean to write LA and NYC?

[radioactivefox]

Yeah, that's what I meant. Probably I should distinguish, but the reader would def know by this point that those were the places James is talking about.