Wow. This is amazing. I absolutely loved it all. I love high school AUs and I love bonding AUs. Fusing them together just made the story even better. Poor Marcus. That hit me hard. I was trying that the end of the first part. Stupid Esca! But I'm so glad it got cleared up in the end. Love it. Fantastic job and it works so well with the picture, which is also awesome!
Ok, seriously? THIS IS AMAZING. The part in the auditorium when Marcus catches Esca looking at him gave me chills, it just...I don't even know. Something about that really harkened back to high school; when meeting a crush's eyes in a crowded room was completely earth-shatteringly amazing. Ugh that image is just so striking. Everything else about this too, is just so sharp and ingenious. And hot. Did I mention hot?
And I'm totally not geeking out about the mention of college football. on one hand, whyyyyy Ohio State, bb??? on the other hand...they are in the same conference as my Huskers so...go Big 10?
I'm only just getting around to reading fics posted ages ago but UGH this was wonderful. Loved it. Love the soul bonding and the angst and hurt Marcus and hurt Esca.
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And I'm totally not geeking out about the mention of college football. on one hand, whyyyyy Ohio State, bb??? on the other hand...they are in the same conference as my Huskers so...go Big 10?
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Also your writing is FANTASTIC. Amazing job!
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