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Come to Me 5-6

Nov 29, 2010 16:38

Title: Come to Me Chapter 5-6
Author: Radioheading
Rating: PG-13, for now.
Genre: Very, very AU
Spoilers:None
Warnings: Unbeta'd
Word Count: 3457
Summary: Dean and Sam aren't hunters but normal, average men. Dean is floundering in his life, moving through the days with no real reason to look forward to the future. He is alone, lonely. But a chance ( Read more... )

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Comments 8

dibbun_k November 29 2010, 12:16:47 UTC

Oh wow. This part is amazing. The way you've described the way Dean feels as his wings emerge and the way you've described the wings when they're covered in blood is fantastic. I feel like I can feel Dean's fear and confusion myself.
Sam's support and acceptance is really lovely.

Thanks for posting this here :) (I think I found it on one of the comms first but I can't remember which one)

radioheading November 29 2010, 12:34:46 UTC

God, this is such a nice comment :) Thank you so much! It really means a lot when people leave feedback and yours is, again, just really kind.

And np about posting here; I should have earlier but I'm so bad about updating all my stuff here. Oops.

stalkerprincess December 29 2010, 03:15:10 UTC

So I sat and read all of your Dean/Cas stories today in one sitting. I'm not very good with reviews and whatnot so I will just say this: Jesus Christ. It's beautiful.

I really hope you continue.

radioheading December 29 2010, 03:50:10 UTC

Thank you so much! <3

I'm definitely continuing, I just have a few other stories to get through first.

In one sitting?? Huge compliment, by the way :)

silvrhuntress February 2 2011, 06:01:57 UTC

This is just gorgeous writing. I love your style and description!

radioheading February 2 2011, 06:31:41 UTC

Thank you so much!

tawg February 8 2011, 23:31:23 UTC

I loved how Sam-like Sam was, if that makes sense - his clam curiosity balancing out Dean's initial horror, the way Sam just goes 'Well, this thing has happened, so now what?' And, of course, the cliffhanger at the end has my itching to get to the next part...

radioheading February 9 2011, 08:26:45 UTC

I had the idea that he would sort of instinctively understand that any panicking on his part would be insanely magnified in Dean, so he really had to stay cool.

And you've got to have a good cliffhanger every once in awhile :)