SGA Fic: A Fight To Remember

[radioshack84]

Title: A Fight To Remember
Author: radioshack84
Word Count: ~5,100
Characters: John, Ronon
Rating: T
Summary: Ronon only celebrates two anniversaries. This is the second.

Comments

[sherry57]

Great story. I love how these two always watch out for each other's back. The whump, friendship and care in this story was really good. Thanks for sharing.

[radioshack84]

Thanks :) I'd been wanting to write a Sheppard/Ronon friendship story for awhile and this is what came of that. I'm glad it worked out and was enjoyable! :)

[bria67]

Wonderful story. It was very well written. I liked the infirmary scene especially, and that John understood why Ronon felt the need to participate in that fight.

[radioshack84]

Thank you! The infirmary scene turned out a bit differently than I'd originally planned, but it seemed to fit better with the rest of the story this way. And knowing Ronon as he does, I'd like to think that John wouldn't give him too much grief over how things ended up. Thanks for reading! :)

[kriadydragon]

Awww, poor Ronon, poor John. But that was wonderful. Poor boys, always feeling guilty for what couldn't be helped. And I always adore stories that show how far John is willing to go for his team :D.

[radioshack84]

Thanks :) I think the feeling guilty and the going above and beyond are kind of a vicious circle for the boys, but it's who they are. Glad you liked it. :)

[saphirablue]

Wonderful story!

I love the idea of John fighting with Ronon and that he keeps getting out of bed so that he can sit with Ronon - even though he isn't really lucid when he does that. :)

Thank you for this fic! :)

[radioshack84]

Thanks! That part of the story was actually somewhat of an accident. When I started out I hadn't intended for John to end up with a concussion at all, but as I was writing that's just how things fell into place and I liked it better that way than what I had planned originally so I kept it. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading! :)

[titan5]

Great friendship piece between Ronon and John. They are so alike and yet so different. I can very easily see this happening. And of course I loved the whump too!!

[radioshack84]

Thanks! After watching the Sherlock Holmes movie I really wanted to write a story where the boys essentially lost in a fighting match, but had a difficult time coming up with a reason for them to be fighting in the first place that wasn't just the usual "fighting for their lives" or "have to fight to prove worthy to trade" or something like that. After much thought and discussion, this is what came of the idea, so I'm happy to hear it turned out to be believable. (And you know me, I can't write without whumping.) ;) Thanks for reading!