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Person of Interest Fic: Tangled Affairs (2 / 2)

Apr 10, 2012 00:22

Title: Tangled Affairs
Author: radioshack84
Pairing/Characters: Gen. Reese, Finch, Fusco
Rating: T
Word Count: ~11,700
Warnings: None I can think of.
Summary: Unforeseen and deadly consequences abound following the dissolution of the latest person of interest’s complex romantic arrangement. Written for the January challenge on reeses-pcs, so of course there’s Reese ( Read more... )

person of interest, fanfic

Comments 23

zootsuitzappy April 10 2012, 07:01:35 UTC

Wonderful fic! A nice mix of Fusco, Finch, Reese banter, Finch and Reese bonding a bit, teasing between the two, and case work to make me feel like this was an actual episode~

radioshack84 April 17 2012, 02:10:08 UTC

Thank you! It's nice to hear it read like an episode in the end, since I hadn't really planned for it to be longer than a couple pages and the plot just kept growing and growing. Glad you liked it! :)

ext_548340 April 10 2012, 08:13:44 UTC

Yes, yes, yes, you are back. This is a wonderful story, funny and yet very tense. Always enjoy your Reese whump, and the great ending you give. Thank you!

radioshack84 April 17 2012, 02:15:43 UTC

Well, I would've been back sooner, but this story was never-ending with its plot twists...every time I thought I was getting close to the end, it would go in a new direction. ;)

Glad you enjoyed the whump and that crossing PoI with A Gifted Man worked well. The two shows are quite different, so I wasn't sure anyone here would even be a mutual fan. Thanks for reading! :)

ext_548340 April 10 2012, 08:14:51 UTC

P.S. Loved the addition of the Holt characters from A Gifted Man. Great addition!

dien April 10 2012, 08:46:30 UTC

Haha, what a chaotic but fun plot! I thought the hypothermia/action sequence was done really really well. I was on the edge of my seat, anyway. Thanks for sharing!

radioshack84 April 17 2012, 02:20:59 UTC

Thanks! I'm always trying to improve my pacing and descriptions for suspense/action scenes, and I was pretty happy with how this one turned out, so I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)

jackfan2 April 10 2012, 15:55:23 UTC

ANOTHER PERSON OF INTEREST FAN!!! YAY!!!

I'm so glad it's inspired you to write in this fandom and I was so excited to read another fic by you again. I became a fan of your work in the SGA fandom.

Your characterizations and dialogue of Reese, Finch and Fusco were so spot on. The plot was perfectly windy enough and I felt I was watching an episode! Excellent work here!

And God, I love me some hurt!Reese with some caring!Finch and even a concerned!Fusco. I love Fusco. He's really trying to redeem himself. *hugs Fusco*

I look forward to your next fic in this fandom. I'd love to see you tackle Carter and Reese' relationship, though in a totally non-shippy way. Just them working together, that would be fantastic.

Anywho, look forward to more from you in PoI!!!

Cheers!

radioshack84 April 17 2012, 02:41:04 UTC

Hey! I know you! LOL It's always great to find more PoI fans, though I think you're only the second one I know of that carried over from the SGA fandom. :)

Thanks for the lovely comments. I was so worried that the plot had gotten a little *too* windy and confusing, so to have so many say it reads like an episode is a big relief. :)

You should join in and write some whumped!Reese fics...there aren't nearly enough out there yet, but rest assured I will continue to work on fixing that problem. ;) As for Carter and Reese...I haven't quite gotten the feel for them yet. Fusco is so much more fun to write for me at this point...but I'll probably get around to Carter eventually. Just have to get an idea sparked is all. Good to hear from you again! :)