I hope this works! Way to go Carson for at least coming up with an alternative. Enjoying the back and forth between John and Rodney - sounds very true to their characters. Can't wait for the next update!!
As I've told a few other people, this chapter had me worried that John & Rodney were a little out of character so I'm glad it's just a case of me being my toughest critic. :)
I just now noticed that you commented on all of the chapters, not just this one! Thank you for the kind words, and I'm glad you finally got a chance to read. When you were posting Possession I was in the same boat, I kept seeing it there but didn't have any spare time. :) I never got a chance to comment on all the chapters for that one, but it was truly fantastic. All of your supporting characters had such depth, and I could just see the story taking place as I was reading. And of course your writing of Ronon, Melena, and everyone else was right on also. :)
Anywho, thanks again for your comments and now I have to go run and post the next couple chapters so I can go to sleep!
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As I've told a few other people, this chapter had me worried that John & Rodney were a little out of character so I'm glad it's just a case of me being my toughest critic. :)
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Anywho, thanks again for your comments and now I have to go run and post the next couple chapters so I can go to sleep!
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