SGA Fic: Reciprocal Symmetry ( 12 / 12 )

[radioshack84]

Title: Reciprocal Symmetry

Comments

[rawa_02]

I really enjoyed reading the entire story. But I feel it's needs another chapter/epilogue to tie up loose ends.(Are they still connected? How did they have that conversation if they were unconscious? And that bit at the end seems out of place.)

[bethany171989]

My thoughts exactly!!! Well, all in all I thought it was a great and(funny)story!!!

[radioshack84]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

[radioshack84]

I'm sorry the ending wasn't to your liking. I like to leave a few questions unanswered to allow the reader to draw their own conclusions. Also, at this point--so soon after waking up--I didn't think it would be realistic to have Carson saying with 100% certainty that everything was fine. After all that happened, it would take a little time to be sure.

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the story. Thanks for reading. :)

[coolbreeze1]

Great story! I really enjoyed this. John's experience of his body crashing and of feeling Rodney come in to help fly the jumper was excellent. I loved seeing Rodney's version of the experience the chapter before, and now John's experience in this one. They finally beat that Ancient machine! Those poor Marines at the end - not too bright of them. They are going to pay for that prank (if they haven't already on Snow Globe world). This was a great combination of h/c, mystery and humor. Thanks for sharing with us!

[radioshack84]

Oh yeah, those Marines are in for some trouble once John's feeling better. =D

I'm glad the explanations of John & Rodney's connection worked out. It took a lot of time to shape it into something I thought people would understand without knowing what I was thinking about for the duration of the story. I'm terrible at outlining a plot, and sometimes (this story especially) I get so many details going that it's difficult to sort them out in the end, so it's good to hear that it was entertaining and not just confusing. Thanks for reading! :)

[alzarin_red]

I'm almost sad to see the end, especially with so many questions left unanswered. What was the motivation for the pranks and just what will Sheppard do to the people involved? And now I'm curious about the first run in with Snow Globe (you know, if you're looking for ideas for a prequel. ;) ) If the device had shut down, how did they communicate that last time? But yes, a lovely bit of whumping, thank you.

[radioshack84]

I like leaving a couple of loose ends for people to ponder at the end. I apologize if I left too many.

We'll see about Snow Globe. I don't have any immediate plans to do more with it, but you never know, a plot bunny could strike at any time. ;)

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[kriadydragon]

That was great! Awesome whumping, bit of a mystery, and Sheppard's going to get revenge for all the stupid pranks. Thanks for such an excellent read, I really enjoyed this. :D

[radioshack84]

Thank you, and you're welcome! :)

Yes, Shep is definitely going to get himself some revenge. I wouldn't want to be those Marines! =D

Thanks for reading!

[roo1965]

Interesting that they still had a 'connection' whilst unconscious..and i'm glad the pranksters were discovered and the hints about the previous trip to 992 beg another story. An intruiging whump/Ancient tech gone bonkers fic.

[radioshack84]

Ancient tech seems to be synonymous with 'bonkers'. =D

I don't have any ideas at the moment for another fic about Snow Globe, but we'll see what happens in the future. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)