SGA Fic: Negative To The Mark (1 / 2)

[radioshack84]

Title: Negative To The Mark
Author: radioshack84
Word Count: ~16,700
Rating: T
Set: Season 3 between The Return--Part 2 and Sunday
Summary: “What is the nature of the problem?”
“Submersion warnings, sir. I’m not sure how long we have.”
“How long we have until what?” Sheppard demanded, now wide awake.
“Until Atlantis sinks, sir.”
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Comments

[kristen999]

This is a very cool premise, exploring issues with the ballast tanks and the city mechanics of staying afloat. The attention to detail with the physics of the ocean involving both the under water jumper and the waves on the pier are very realistic and I love the ongoing mystery.

Poor John. I had trouble walking around with just one broken rib after four days, I couldn't imagine John being rocked around with triple the busted bones!