Aw. Poor Marian. This was all so believable - the comraderie of the gang, the anger of Djaq on Marian's behalf, little John's hidden talents... it was wonderful. :)
It's nice to see Robin caring for Marian. And somehow I'm not surprised that he's a natural father. You wrote all the characters very well, very distinctly. Excellent job!
I'm glad you liked the characterisation: I love how each of the gang has their own distinctive voice, and I love putting them in situations like this where they're all together and they each respond to the situation in their own individual way. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it. :)
Suddenly, the door burst open, and there he was, grinning widely, his hair tousled, as he reached up with one hand to take off his cloak.
...I'm still in that stage of giggling when I think of Robin doing anything I consider remotely attractive. Like that right there. Which I dislike immensely because I promised myself I wouldn't fall in love with the show. Three days, many episodes later, and fat lot of good that promise did.
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Glad you liked! And your icon is so pretty.
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...I'm still in that stage of giggling when I think of Robin doing anything I consider remotely attractive. Like that right there. Which I dislike immensely because I promised myself I wouldn't fall in love with the show. Three days, many episodes later, and fat lot of good that promise did.
Lovely story.
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Haha, welcome to the dark side. Everyone falls in love with Robin Hood, whether they want to or not :D
Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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