Comments | radlilskafan: my poem

radlilskafan

my poem

Jul 31, 2004 18:46

I wish I wouldn't awaken from my beautiful sleep
Away from the world, a slumber so deep

Dreams of my wants, my wishes, my needs
Dreams of love and what I believe

To awaken, to return to my emotional war
That has shattered my heart time and time before

Reality is something I hate, I dread
The only way to escape is asleep in my bed

So I hope to die ( Read more... )

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voxrok July 31 2004, 20:34:02 UTC

that makes me depressed...are you ok? i love you
-lys

radlilskafan July 31 2004, 20:34:36 UTC

i am better...thank you tho, sorry I got u depressed

voxrok July 31 2004, 20:40:54 UTC

no need to apologize, it's my fault that i got depressed, i'm just a loser like that...an emo loser! i love you
-lys

radlilskafan July 31 2004, 20:41:35 UTC

i am a loser too! maybe thats how we randomly met online!!!! destiny!

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anonymous July 31 2004, 21:21:59 UTC

donut!! that's a really good poem. you should think about writing some really good stuff and entering it at the poetry contest. im not kidding! i would have..but..I LOST ALL MINE!! NOOOO!! haha no wrys...i lost my touch anyways. talk to you online, meh sister

radlilskafan July 31 2004, 21:24:54 UTC

eh! no write can loose their touch, its just about feelings! Thanks for everything petey, everything u said to me really helped out in the long run. If you didnt know I had a break down not too long after it but hey, I am better now. Lub u more than my adopted sister. (lol me and petey have an inside joke YESS)