another poem

[radlilskafan]

The teardrop fell from her nose
Falling into a proud red rose
Matching the shape of her drooping frown
The rose fell limply to the ground
Black with pain, wilted, it died
Crippled from the dark tears that she cried
It was dead and on the groud it layed
And the girl lies the exact same way

Comments

[radlilskafan]

why when i post poems must i misspell something?!

*ground

O MAN!

[k_unit29]

sorta morbid... but i like it!!!!!!!!! I LUB U MORE THAN U CAN POSSIBLY FATHOM!

[dreamt_of_red]

not quite morbid, but still very, very good. you have real talent rae.

[radlilskafan]

yea i was hoping it wasnt morbid. Its peaceful...not morbid