(Mage) Tombs: And she came to me at night

[radu_hashim]

She was incredibly nervous when he told her how much he wanted to hold her under the stars, how much he wanted to run his fingers through her hair as they sat beneath the tired oak tree with their cider. He could see the fear and the hesitation in his eyes and Tombs regretted once again for speaking so honestly, so passionately to her. When would

Comments

[passionsbounty]

So I start reading this scene and think "This isn't how that conversation went...did I miss something?" That's how perfectly you wrote Mouse right there.

Sooooo goood!

awesome.

[radu_hashim]

SWEEET!!!! thank you a hundred times over, i'm glad that i managed to pull her off that well and provided a bit of a surprise.

i wanted to do something to play up how nervous he was getting along with just how much the stygian experience still haunts him from time to time.

[llwydrew]

Creeeeeeepy...

I mistook it for a conversation as well, freaked me the fuck out.

Very good job Q!

-Tug

[radu_hashim]

thank you very much! i'm really happy that i was able to pull off the effect that i wanted, namely to make it very "realistic" till the very end when it becomes clear it is a nightmare. glad that you liked it. lol