9/11 - Not your average commentary.
I'll be the first to admit that I bawled my eyes on on 9/11. I wasn't angry, wasn't scared, wasn't panicked. I wasn't even in the United States of America when it happened. I was incredibly sad for my friends and.. a few people I knew in NY at the time, people I had just visited, namely vampirekiss and her father who worked in the WTC.
I remember working my shift, 9am until 1pm. I was basically a maid at the Royal Air Force base in Uxbridge, just on the outskirts of London. It was an illegal job -- I worked under the name Laura Dunton, which was the name of the girl I lived with. (We met on the internet of course.) But that is another story. Basically, I had just gotten home from work scrubbing toilets, changing bedsheets, vacuuming, taking out trash and the like. I sat down at the computer, got online, and that was when Will Bunch (Robin's husband, if know who she is) instant messaged me to tell me to turn on CNN. I remember being really snotty about it and saying we had the BBC there, so he told me to turn on the BBC. I reluctantly turned the tv on and flipped through channels, but all I could find was this annoying suspense thriller showing a plane flying into a building. Yeah.
Fast forward, but understand that my experience with this was unlike any American's who spent it in the country. I'm not sure how I would have reacted living in NY or even just being back in Michigan. All I know is that I had flown from NY only a few months before (after spending time there with Jen, Chella, and beaniekins), lived in England, and then flew back to NY a month after 9/11. Quite a difference coming back. (Unrelated, I accidentally had a can of California Highway Patrol issue mace from Emily's cop dad in my bag at the security point. No one caught it. I didn't bring it on purpose, but was carrying it around in my bag for safety in general... missed it while packing for my flight. This was in the year 2002, right after 9/11. Really lame security if you ask me.)
That said, I think the way Americans treat the subject is totally irrational, even if it is understandable. Seven years later and we're still chasing our tails, blowing god knows how much money on this issue, and it's just.... again... sad.
What it comes down to is that I think we are so incredibly self-centered. And most of us do not accept or even see this fact/possibility. I think speaking to amyty about some issues helps put me into perspective. (She's in Australia.)
In my Critical Thinking class, we were given an essay to read and then we're meant to define argument, premise, and conclusion. But that aside, I can't even express how much some of this essay made me breathe a sigh of relief in knowing I'm not the only one who thinks these things. (Keep in mind, some examples are totally like comparing apples and oranges and I wonder what the author smoked the day this was written, but you get the idea. When it comes to total death toll, I was very intrigued.) Anyhow, judge for yourself.
Let me restate: I did not write this essay below.
Also, please feel free to comment. This assignment I'm doing is due Sunday at midnight PST, so any discussion you generate/promote can only help me.
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The terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001, produced a response among American officials, the media, and the public that is probably matched only by the attack on Pearl Harbor in 1941. Since it is the very nature of terrorism not only to cause immediate damage but also to strike fear in the hearts of the population under attack, one might say that the terrorists were extraordinarily successful, not just as a result of their own efforts but also in consequence of the American reaction. In this essay, I shall argue that this reaction was irrational to a great extent and that to that extent Americans unwittingly cooperated with the terrorists in achieving a major goal: spreading fear and thus disrupting lives. In other words, we could have reacted more rationally and as a result produced less disruption in the lives of our citizens.
There are several reasons why one might say that a huge reaction to the 9/11 attacks was justified. The first is simply the large number of lives that were lost. In the absence of a shooting war, that 2,800 Americans should die from the same cause strikes us as extraordinary indeed. But does the sheer size of the loss of life warrant the reaction we saw? Clearly sheer numbers do not always impress us. It is unlikely, for example, that many Americans remember that, earlier in 2001, an earthquake in Gujarat, India, killed approximately 20,000 people. One might explain the difference in reaction by saying that we naturally respond more strongly to the deaths of Americans closer to home than to those of others halfway around the world. But then consider the fact that, every month during 2001 more Americans were killed in automobile crashes than were killed on 9/11 (and it has continued every month since as well). Since the victims of car accidents come from every geographical area and every social stratum, one can say that those deaths are even “closer to home” than the deaths that occurred in New York, Washington, and Pennsylvania. It may be harder to identify with an earthquake victim in Asia than with a 9/11 victim, but this cannot be said for the victims of fatal automobile accidents.
One might say that it was the malice of the perpetrators that makes the 9/11 deaths so noteworthy, but surely there is plenty of malice present in the 15,000 homicides that occur every year in the United States. And while we have passed strict laws favoring prosecution of murderers, we do not see the huge and expensive shift in priorities that has followed the 9/11 attacks. It seems clear, at least, that sheer numbers cannot explain the response to 9/11. If more reasons were needed, we might consider that the actual total of the number of 9/11 deaths seemed of little consequence in post-attack reports. Immediately after the attacks, the estimated death toll was about 6,500. Several weeks later it was clear that fewer than half that many had actually died, but was there a great sigh of relief when it was learned that over 3,000 people who were believed to have died were still alive? Not at all. In fact, well after it was confirmed that no more than 3,000 people had died, Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld still talked about “over 5,000” deaths on 9/11. So the actual number seems to be of less consequence than one might have believed.
We should remember that fear and outrage at the attacks are only the beginning of the country’s response to 9/11. We now have a new cabinet-level Department of Homeland Security; billions have been spent on beefing up security and in tracking terrorists and potential terrorists; billions more have been spent supporting airlines whose revenues took a nosedive after the attacks; the Congress was pulled away from other important business; the National Guard was called out to patrol the nation’s airports; air travelers have been subjected to time-consuming and expensive security measures; you can probably think of a half-dozen other items to add to this list. It is probable that a great lot of this trouble and expense is unwarranted. We think that random searches of luggage of elderly ladies getting on airplanes in Laramie, Wyoming, for example, is more effective as a way of annoying elderly ladies than of stopping terrorism.
We might have accomplished something if we had been able to treat the terrorist attacks of 9/11 in a way similar to how we treat the carnage on the nation’s highways-by implementing practices and requirements that are directly related to results (as in the case of speed limits, safety belts, and the like, which took decades to accomplish in the cause of auto safety)- rather than by throwing the nation into a near panic and using the resulting fears to justify expensive but not necessarily effective or even relevant measures. But we focused on 9/11 because of its terrorist nature and because of the spectacular film that was shown over and over on television, imprinting forever the horrific images of the airliner’s collision with the World Trade Center and the subsequent collapse of the two towers. The media’s instant obsession with the case is understandable, even if it is out of proportion to the actual damage, as awful as it was, when we compare the actual loss to the loss from automobile accidents.
Finally, our point is that marginal or even completely ineffective expenditures and disruptive practices have taken our time, attention, and national treasure away from other matters with more promise of making the country a better place. We seem to have all begun to think of ourselves as terrorist targets, but, in fact, reason tells us we are in much greater danger from our friends and neighbors behind the wheels of their cars.
The remainder of the essays in this section are here for analysis and evaluation. Your instructor will probably have specific directions if he or she assigns them, but at a minimum, they offer an opportunity to identify issues, separate arguments from other elements, identify premises and conclusions, evaluate the likely truth of the premises and the strength of the arguments, look for unstated assumptions or omitted premises, and lots of other stuff besides. We offer sample directions for many of the pieces.
I remember working my shift, 9am until 1pm. I was basically a maid at the Royal Air Force base in Uxbridge, just on the outskirts of London. It was an illegal job -- I worked under the name Laura Dunton, which was the name of the girl I lived with. (We met on the internet of course.) But that is another story. Basically, I had just gotten home from work scrubbing toilets, changing bedsheets, vacuuming, taking out trash and the like. I sat down at the computer, got online, and that was when Will Bunch (Robin's husband, if know who she is) instant messaged me to tell me to turn on CNN. I remember being really snotty about it and saying we had the BBC there, so he told me to turn on the BBC. I reluctantly turned the tv on and flipped through channels, but all I could find was this annoying suspense thriller showing a plane flying into a building. Yeah.
Fast forward, but understand that my experience with this was unlike any American's who spent it in the country. I'm not sure how I would have reacted living in NY or even just being back in Michigan. All I know is that I had flown from NY only a few months before (after spending time there with Jen, Chella, and beaniekins), lived in England, and then flew back to NY a month after 9/11. Quite a difference coming back. (Unrelated, I accidentally had a can of California Highway Patrol issue mace from Emily's cop dad in my bag at the security point. No one caught it. I didn't bring it on purpose, but was carrying it around in my bag for safety in general... missed it while packing for my flight. This was in the year 2002, right after 9/11. Really lame security if you ask me.)
That said, I think the way Americans treat the subject is totally irrational, even if it is understandable. Seven years later and we're still chasing our tails, blowing god knows how much money on this issue, and it's just.... again... sad.
What it comes down to is that I think we are so incredibly self-centered. And most of us do not accept or even see this fact/possibility. I think speaking to amyty about some issues helps put me into perspective. (She's in Australia.)
In my Critical Thinking class, we were given an essay to read and then we're meant to define argument, premise, and conclusion. But that aside, I can't even express how much some of this essay made me breathe a sigh of relief in knowing I'm not the only one who thinks these things. (Keep in mind, some examples are totally like comparing apples and oranges and I wonder what the author smoked the day this was written, but you get the idea. When it comes to total death toll, I was very intrigued.) Anyhow, judge for yourself.
Let me restate: I did not write this essay below.
Also, please feel free to comment. This assignment I'm doing is due Sunday at midnight PST, so any discussion you generate/promote can only help me.
===============================
The terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001, produced a response among American officials, the media, and the public that is probably matched only by the attack on Pearl Harbor in 1941. Since it is the very nature of terrorism not only to cause immediate damage but also to strike fear in the hearts of the population under attack, one might say that the terrorists were extraordinarily successful, not just as a result of their own efforts but also in consequence of the American reaction. In this essay, I shall argue that this reaction was irrational to a great extent and that to that extent Americans unwittingly cooperated with the terrorists in achieving a major goal: spreading fear and thus disrupting lives. In other words, we could have reacted more rationally and as a result produced less disruption in the lives of our citizens.
There are several reasons why one might say that a huge reaction to the 9/11 attacks was justified. The first is simply the large number of lives that were lost. In the absence of a shooting war, that 2,800 Americans should die from the same cause strikes us as extraordinary indeed. But does the sheer size of the loss of life warrant the reaction we saw? Clearly sheer numbers do not always impress us. It is unlikely, for example, that many Americans remember that, earlier in 2001, an earthquake in Gujarat, India, killed approximately 20,000 people. One might explain the difference in reaction by saying that we naturally respond more strongly to the deaths of Americans closer to home than to those of others halfway around the world. But then consider the fact that, every month during 2001 more Americans were killed in automobile crashes than were killed on 9/11 (and it has continued every month since as well). Since the victims of car accidents come from every geographical area and every social stratum, one can say that those deaths are even “closer to home” than the deaths that occurred in New York, Washington, and Pennsylvania. It may be harder to identify with an earthquake victim in Asia than with a 9/11 victim, but this cannot be said for the victims of fatal automobile accidents.
One might say that it was the malice of the perpetrators that makes the 9/11 deaths so noteworthy, but surely there is plenty of malice present in the 15,000 homicides that occur every year in the United States. And while we have passed strict laws favoring prosecution of murderers, we do not see the huge and expensive shift in priorities that has followed the 9/11 attacks. It seems clear, at least, that sheer numbers cannot explain the response to 9/11. If more reasons were needed, we might consider that the actual total of the number of 9/11 deaths seemed of little consequence in post-attack reports. Immediately after the attacks, the estimated death toll was about 6,500. Several weeks later it was clear that fewer than half that many had actually died, but was there a great sigh of relief when it was learned that over 3,000 people who were believed to have died were still alive? Not at all. In fact, well after it was confirmed that no more than 3,000 people had died, Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld still talked about “over 5,000” deaths on 9/11. So the actual number seems to be of less consequence than one might have believed.
We should remember that fear and outrage at the attacks are only the beginning of the country’s response to 9/11. We now have a new cabinet-level Department of Homeland Security; billions have been spent on beefing up security and in tracking terrorists and potential terrorists; billions more have been spent supporting airlines whose revenues took a nosedive after the attacks; the Congress was pulled away from other important business; the National Guard was called out to patrol the nation’s airports; air travelers have been subjected to time-consuming and expensive security measures; you can probably think of a half-dozen other items to add to this list. It is probable that a great lot of this trouble and expense is unwarranted. We think that random searches of luggage of elderly ladies getting on airplanes in Laramie, Wyoming, for example, is more effective as a way of annoying elderly ladies than of stopping terrorism.
We might have accomplished something if we had been able to treat the terrorist attacks of 9/11 in a way similar to how we treat the carnage on the nation’s highways-by implementing practices and requirements that are directly related to results (as in the case of speed limits, safety belts, and the like, which took decades to accomplish in the cause of auto safety)- rather than by throwing the nation into a near panic and using the resulting fears to justify expensive but not necessarily effective or even relevant measures. But we focused on 9/11 because of its terrorist nature and because of the spectacular film that was shown over and over on television, imprinting forever the horrific images of the airliner’s collision with the World Trade Center and the subsequent collapse of the two towers. The media’s instant obsession with the case is understandable, even if it is out of proportion to the actual damage, as awful as it was, when we compare the actual loss to the loss from automobile accidents.
Finally, our point is that marginal or even completely ineffective expenditures and disruptive practices have taken our time, attention, and national treasure away from other matters with more promise of making the country a better place. We seem to have all begun to think of ourselves as terrorist targets, but, in fact, reason tells us we are in much greater danger from our friends and neighbors behind the wheels of their cars.
The remainder of the essays in this section are here for analysis and evaluation. Your instructor will probably have specific directions if he or she assigns them, but at a minimum, they offer an opportunity to identify issues, separate arguments from other elements, identify premises and conclusions, evaluate the likely truth of the premises and the strength of the arguments, look for unstated assumptions or omitted premises, and lots of other stuff besides. We offer sample directions for many of the pieces.