twisted knots - chapter 1

Feb 01, 2012 13:49


Happiness. Jinki felt his heart bursting in happiness. Why though? A boy ran past him, shouting playfully over his shoulder “Come catch me if you can!” The boy’s smile was magic.

Kibum?

The two of them were in a beautiful park, lush greenery surrounding them at every turn, the air filled with the sweet smell of flowers and freshly mown grass.

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catiet10 February 1 2012, 06:56:59 UTC
Good, good!
Can't wait to read the part were he meets kibum!
This was great, can't wait for your next chapter.

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raelee92 February 1 2012, 16:37:49 UTC
Thanks dear! I'm sorry, i'll have to keep you guys in suspense a little longer :D Can't rush the story since it'll get very confusing and disjointed. Thanks for commenting and loving this fic! (:

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raelee92 February 1 2012, 16:38:20 UTC
Lol thanks for commenting! Yes, i'll try my best to update soon (:

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amber_serkly February 1 2012, 09:47:48 UTC
NO! WHAT IS THIS??!
it's just a teaser, not a chapter! D:
you better keep your promise, i want to see the continuation within this week! =.=
homg don't tell me kibum is a ghost here O.O
what's with that dream and the warm air around Jinki at night??
update update update soon! <3<3<3 :-*

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raelee92 February 1 2012, 16:42:01 UTC
HAHAHAHA i swear it's a chapter since i felt that it's important to first show jinki's mental and emotional state of mind. We've leapt years from the prologue to here, i don't want to jump into stuff too quickly ahaha.

Thanks for bugging me dear, you always inspire me to write more! I'll do my best to update soon! (: And your questions will be answered in due time (:

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amber_serkly February 3 2012, 07:40:00 UTC
err I take that back, don't rush yourself :x
coz I myself don't really like it when ppl keep telling me to update soon XP
anw, fighting! :D

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raelee92 February 3 2012, 17:44:36 UTC
hahaha no worries dear, i do need a bit of prodding to continue as well :/ i may be busy but i admit that i do get a teensy bit lazy to write sometimes. thanks for the support and encouragement anyway! (:

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sunday_lee February 1 2012, 11:40:50 UTC
did Kibum die? did he come back and haunt Jinki because Jinki left him alone in the orphanage?
lol i'm just kidding
can't wait for the next chapter ^^

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raelee92 February 1 2012, 16:45:46 UTC
Your questions will be answered little by little so stay tuned to this fic! I know this chapter really seems like a filler, but trust me, i deliberately made it ambiguous so that i can lead you into the story bit by bit and don't risk any confusion (:

Thanks for commenting!

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tokki24 February 1 2012, 12:18:51 UTC
I need to read this continuation ASAP!!
OMG! Hahahaaaaaa..
I'm excited!! ☆*:.。. o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆

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raelee92 February 1 2012, 16:47:16 UTC
Hahaha thanks for commenting! (: And i'll try my very best to update soon, i promise! Thanks for loving this fic!

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