twisted knots - chapter 4

[raelee92]

It was a dreary and depressing Saturday morning, the sky outside Jinki’s bedroom window overshadowed with dark cumulonimbus clouds, threatening heavy rain. A stray lightning struck across the sky, momentarily illuminating the dark sky but disappearing as soon as it had come.

Jinki lay in his bed, currently experiencing a peculiar feeling of being

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OMG FORGIVE ME I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT THIS D':<

[amber_serkly]

BRB

OHGOSH I LITERALLY GO EEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPP WHEN KIBUM SUDDENLY APPEARS IN FRONT OF JINKI :'DD
at first i thought his dad would hit him or something since he shouted at them like that but phew :) it's good that they could understand
it kinda surprises me though, that it only took one visit to one place in order for him to meet Kibum, but it's not like i'm complaiiinniiingg~~ *w* I actually think it came out as a surprise :D
for some reason i feel like this chapter is painfully short although it has more than 2k words, maybe because i'm too eager to read more :') haha don't worry i'm not demanding anything by saying this :3
and i must say that i almost melt into a puddle while OnKey are holding hands all the time TT▽TT though Kibum's sudden breakdown and the news about his permanent injury is so :(
Kibum's full story , 2 weeks from now; gonna write it on my agenda XDDD
aah yes kudos to writers who can do update within a week, those people are friggin awesome .__. *secretly glances at emptycavernanw, that 'tomorrow' means today right

Re: OMG FORGIVE ME I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT THIS D':<

[raelee92]

Yeah yeah yeah ikr, i also felt like Jinki and Kibum's meeting was so sudden, but maybe you felt that way because i kept dropping teasers in the previous chapters so i guess you got used to that :P Glad that you took it as a surprise though! HAHA (:

Don't worry, the next chapters will be looooooong ones; it keeps getting longer with every chapter i write anyway... And yeah, me loves the onkey holding hands scene too! They're so fluffy and affectionate i want to squeeze them both! *squirms*

And yeah, emptycavern is an awesome writer; i love you both the most! *glomps both of you*

My results were good, thank god, beyond my expectations in fact (: My parents are happy and i'm glad i didn't disappoint them this time round.

[amber_serkly]

sorry for taking forever to reply :(
but anw, glad to hear the good news♥ :D congrats for the satisfying exam results! :3
till next time then ^^ good luck with everything! <3

[princesalunar]

gosh this chapter was so emotional, Kibum ;~~~; onew loves you so much, T_T I was listening please don't go from shinee obviously and I almost cry this meeting was so beautiful but sad at the same time.

they are so lovely together, a sweet love always =3 my otp is so precious xD

[raelee92]

Aww please don't cry! *hands you tissue* i hope those are happy tears though, they've finally met! Heh.

I can tell that you're a complete, total HARDCORE onkey shipper just like me! I love onkey too! AND YES, they're so damn precious i wanna grab them and squeeze them!

Hee. Thanks for reading and commenting! (:

[ninaloveonew]

its heartwarming and also heartbreaking at the same time.. im glad that finally, jinki and kibum is able to meet again. but poor kibum. his life must be hard, i wish jinki could find him more faster #please dont separate them again T-T#

[raelee92]

Heehee thanks for reading and for commenting! (: I'm sorry for making kibum suffer but yeah...that makes jinki all the more special yes? (:

[icutkey]

crying again...i really love thiiiissss.....
when jinki said byt u're my everything,it makes me crying again.....

that bastard who make kibum limpong...gonna kill that person..hahahahaa

[raelee92]

Thanks for reading and commenting but sorry for making you cry hahhaha *hands you tissue* there! :D

[icutkey]

thanks(for the tissue)hahahahaaa....

[melalocket]

omg T^T .........................
poor bumie T^T .. *le sobs*
goshh T^T