twisted knots - chapter 5

Apr 03, 2012 16:03


Jinki clasped Kibum in his arms protectively for a long time, burying his nose in his smooth soft hair and allowing himself to revel in the immense sense of comfort that he derives simply from being close to Kibum.

Kibum simply held on to Jinki, his head placed sideways on Jinki’s shoulder and his nose against the side of Jinki’s neck. The feel of ( Read more... )

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raelee92 April 3 2012, 15:45:21 UTC
I'm so touched by the fact that you so religiously follow this fic and this terrible author. Thanks for commenting dear, it means a lot to me! (: Heh, the answer will be revealed next chapter!

And yes, i'll like to see onew and key get along better with each other; i can see only kibum with jinki and no one else!

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suru_jun April 3 2012, 12:18:04 UTC
please don't drop this! its really good. i'll be waiting the next chap. =)

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raelee92 April 3 2012, 15:48:43 UTC
Thanks dear! (: Yes, i'll need some serious persuasion and nagging to not give up on this story...tsk.

Thanks for the encouragement and the compliment, i'll update soon (i hope) :D

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emptycavern April 3 2012, 14:18:05 UTC
BB I MISS YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! D:
Heh finally I read this continuation that is full of Onkey fluff keke. And I seriously like the Jongyu friendship here. Jonghyun being all supportive and intuitive like that is my favourite Jonghyun ^^

How come I sense some danger though? Like the uncle is the cause for Kibum's bad leg and I have a feeling that he might drive a punch at Jinki seeing them like that on his doorstep :/ I pray that I am wrong though.

And no. No no no no, bb. You can't drop this. Just no.
You and both know that you can't leave it right?
Good.

Btw I didn't think what was said was true though, about Onkey not being closer than mere members. I mean I'm not sure if it was my Onkey-shipping mind thinking too much, but it felt like the rest were just trying to set them up to do the video message for each other. Thinking about the things they do, like the most famous occasions where Key chose Jinki to ask along to the bathroom out of all other things. Not close, really? Gta try harder~

Hehe love you bb~ <3

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raelee92 April 3 2012, 16:02:21 UTC
I MISS YOU TOO BB!!! How have you been?? *glomps you ( ... )

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emptycavern April 4 2012, 14:17:52 UTC
Hihihi! ^^
Haha life could get better for me tbh. So much has happened since the last time we talked that I got a bit thrown. I'm getting sick of my job as well and it's my biggest obstacle in writing these days ):

It's okay, I can bear to wait. And better still if it surprises me :)

Aww you're so sweet! But if I can provide you the motivation to keep writing, then I'm really super glad. Of course I know how it feels like, it's been more than just once or twice I thought of stopping a fic, or just drop writing altogether. But I don't in the end because of all the effort put in, and all the ideas you want to share with your readers. Hang in there love :)

Well of all things I do not know about Onkey, I am at least sure that they must be close to each other, certainly beyond just being members in a group. & I don't overthink about them that often so I guess I can be safe on that :P

Hehe keep the awesome chapters coming bb! <3

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raelee92 April 5 2012, 06:16:27 UTC
Awww it's great to hear you're doing good bb! Yeah it's been exactly a month ago since we last chatted i think. Press on with your job dear, this is probably the only non-studying period that you'll ever get to experience again!

(: Good luck with everything, and also with your fic! (I'm not going to let you off the hook so easily teehee). Looking forward to your updates too! And i'll continue working hard on this! (:

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raelee92 April 3 2012, 15:50:16 UTC
Hahha i'm glad i piqued your interest though this chapter is an epic fail from my point of view...

Thanks for your comment, and you'll get your answers soon enough! :)

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princesalunar April 4 2012, 00:40:56 UTC
please don't give up ;~~~~; I love this history!!

The way onew and key shows their love is so sweet and beautiful that I feel so envy hahahaha I hope that the uncle won't be a problem for their relationship >//<

I think Jjong and Minho ship onkey LOL I think Jjong was only joking, key and onew have a good relationship, the only thing is that they shows their love privately (?) hahahaha the way onew was staring at key the whole time *___* o.m.g I would die if I was there

We have to say thanks to Jjong and Minho because at the end onkey made the video-message <3 and Key said "I love you" to onew *rolling all over the place*

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raelee92 April 4 2012, 02:10:55 UTC
HAHAHAHA YES don't you just envy their love?? *blissful*

): hahahaha yes the onkey shipper in me would like to believe that they only show their love privately. AND YES OMG, the glances they were exchanging throughout the whole thing~

AND YES KEY YOU KNOW YOU LOVE YOUR DUBU HUSBAND, WE KNOW, BUT IT TOOK YOU DAMN FOREVER TO SAY IT HAHAHA.

Thanks for commenting and sorry for my raving lol! Seeing all your sweet comments, i promise i'll press on now!

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