twisted knots - chapter 7

May 27, 2012 23:49


The weak early morning sunlight shone through the slightly parted curtains in the living room, illuminating the few specks of dust floating in the air.

Jinki and Kibum were both lying asleep on the sofa, a thick blanket draped over them during the course of the night. The sight of them alone spoke of love and innocence. Kibum’s head rested on Jinki ( Read more... )

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ninaloveonew May 27 2012, 22:45:25 UTC
seriously~~~ jonghyun is cute, he acts like a fangirl in front of kibum XD glad that another person know about their relationship, and its jinki’s best friend. hope that jjong can help them out^^

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raelee92 May 29 2012, 14:03:45 UTC
Haha i'm glad you love jonghyun here. He's kinda weird and obnoxious but a really good friend; though somewhat possessive hehe. Yep, you're right, that's jjong's function here!

Thanks for reading and commenting! (:

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emptycavern May 28 2012, 17:25:59 UTC
Hi bb I'm finally here hehe~
Well well, I'm loving all the Onkey fluff here and there! It's really nice and relaxing (?) to read the tenderness Kibum is showing to Jinki (for a change, I can say). But the fact that Jinki still haven't heard from his parents is just ):

The addition of Jonghyun is just so comical! I mean the way he teases Kibum and how they interact hahaha. I hope that he and Kibum would sort out the mess quickly with Jinki's parents :)

Good chapter bb! Proud of you! ^^

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raelee92 May 29 2012, 14:16:35 UTC
BB!!!!! (: *glomps you* hehe imho this is a pathetic product considering how long i've been complaining that i just can't write. Very much full of fluff, but you do know that it's just to shamelessly satisfy my own desire for onkey right? LOL.

You'll find out more about jinki's parents in the later chapters! Don't judge them too early yet.

And i'm glad you love jonghyun here as much as i do! He's significant in his own weird and twisted way ahahaha. This is why i never like jongkey; no offense to jongkey shippers but this is the only kind of relationship i can imagine forming between key and jonghyun; nothing else.

Thanks for the praise bb! But ugh, my self esteem is just...not there. Anyway good luck for YOUR fic hehe and i'm looking forward to your update! (:

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mskpop90 June 8 2012, 02:28:44 UTC
Hi there! I am a new reader and i have got to say i am in love with your fic. i have been reading this since the prolog. sorry i have not written earlier.

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raelee92 June 10 2012, 15:38:34 UTC
Hello (: Thanks for giving this fic your love though i update so awfully infrequently (: I'm glad i've got a silent reader to comment! I can only hope that there are more of them out there. Knowing that people love and appreciate my story makes the writing all the more worthwhile!

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amber_serkly June 14 2012, 09:44:43 UTC
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW i cant help but squeal at various scenes in this chapter like Jonghyun xD
lol Jinki just look at how lame you are :-"
yaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyy JONGHYUN IS HERE!!! 8DD
keke Jinki's got tons to explain tomorrow morning at school. or were Jonghyun and Kibum planning to keep it as a momentary secret between them? so they're gonna check what they can get from Jinki's parents without him knowing? err now that i had said it, that kinda seems obvious :/ it was their plan from the start anyway.
i hope Jinki's parents won't be against all of this .__.
coz i'd look really stupid with all my blabbers on the previous chapter if that really happens ;~;
Jonghyun awoke to someone shaking his shoulder violently and a considerably painful slap to his head.HAHAHAHA this actually made me laugh so hard. I thought Kibum would be such a total weakling in this fic but looks like i finally see his fierceness in this chapter xDDD ( ... )

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raelee92 June 14 2012, 15:49:28 UTC
Heh everyone just loves jonghyun in this story, but i can really see that we're all on the same frequency here; everybody loves the supportive best friend jonghyun. It's so sweet isn't it? (:

HAHAHAHA i couldn't resist slipping in a bit of the diva kibum in this story nevertheless. Besides, it makes the onkey interaction much sweeter and precious, since kibum is only gentle and vulnerable around jinki. Cue "AWWWWWWWWW" Ain't they sweet??????

*glomps you back* I miss you too bb, you've been gone for too long! We were all wondering where you have disappeared off to! ): But glad that you're back and still so religiously stalking our fics *wipes tears*

Actually i'm not sure how that promise i made to myself will hold, since the university matriculation process is so complex and time-consuming i just wanna die from exhaustion now; not to mention i'm still working and having my driving lessons. I'll try to write as and when i can. It may drag on a bit longer though, but i DEFINITELY will finish this story, you have my word on that! (:

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amber_serkly June 15 2012, 00:03:21 UTC
HEY OF COURSE we would think that his uncle was a suspicious creepy old man! he showed up at onkey's worst times! we were pretty cautious with every single thing happening afterwards so surely we'd think that he's just another addition to the whole matter xD ( ... )

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justcallme_lisa June 28 2012, 15:45:28 UTC
i love these onkey so sweet romance story
and how jinki so clingy to kibum, idk just so sweet
i cant wait for the next chapt.. gooo gooo gooo

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raelee92 June 29 2012, 05:38:45 UTC
Thanks for reading AND commenting dear! I really appreciate it when people comment because i know it's tempting to be a silent reader but you make the effort and i'm grateful!

OMO i love clingy jinki too!!! (: Heh i really don't know when the next chapter will be up, i know the plot in my head but it's different putting it into words. I'll update either way! Thanks again for your comment and support! (:

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