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Dec 14, 2004 18:30

should i rip my bleeding heart out
to prove to you its there
what must i do for you to see
the damage done just wasn't fair

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soul4truth December 15 2004, 08:00:39 UTC
did you write that or is that from something?

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raeofsun12 December 16 2004, 04:09:20 UTC
wrote it...i had written it along time ago but just felt like it really has been true lately....i may have read something similar to it somewhere though....

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soul4truth December 16 2004, 07:22:02 UTC
It's good... and I feel ya

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just continuing the thought littilj December 17 2004, 19:21:32 UTC
should i write the word 'doormat'
plainly across my forehead
in big mean black bold letters
represent what you did and said

should i waste my tears on you
and cry myself to bitter sleep
allow my bleeding heart to do so
to show how you cut me deep

*your words inspired mine, but yours are still better.

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