poems 313

[raevensdemise]

More cyberpunky stuff. Used random excerpts from my reporter's notebook for inspiration. Take that, Journalism profession

Comments

[aqualeah]

It may not snow in Hawaii, but as I'm writing this it is snowing like mad outside my window. My only comment . . . no one rides a motorcycle in the snow. We wait for motorcycles up here like some people wait to see a robin. They are a sign of spring. The only things getting ridden up here right now are snowmobiles. Heh, you might like snowmobiling actually . . . If you can take the cold.

[raevensdemise]

Lol, I wouldn't really ride a motorcycle in the snow either. It just seemed like the most likely comparison to the horse in "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening."

Thanks for pointing out the logic flaw.

[mjrmajor]

I like these!

Bleeding hypertext sounds like fun, and the imagery of bundled squirrels made me go "Awww."

Using meter too, eh? "I stomp indoors, shake out my clothes,/
the keyboard calls, the blank screen glows." Perfect.

Our computer monitors are replacing the hearths we go to after running around in the cold.

You should invent a convenient snow-motorcycle.

[aqualeah]

A snotorcycle???

[chrisminotaur]

So charmingly cyberpunk. ;)

Thanks for coming out tonight!