SPN Fic 7 (1/1)

[rafikiven]

Title: The Woods are Lovely, Dark and Deep

Category: Futurefic, Darkfic

Rating: PG-13

Characters: Dean

Summary: Post-apocalypse snow, woods that are lovely and dark and deep…do I really need a summary for a 630-word fic?

Warnings: Post-apocalypse, Darkfic

Word Count: 630

Disclaimer: Supernatural and its characters are the property of its creators and

Comments

[tahirire]

NICE twist. *shivers appreciatively*

I thought the descriptions were great! (Some people just don't enjoy reading a story that is mainly description.I find that kind of stuff doesn't fly with my hubby, either. *smish*)

I think you did a great job. :-)

[rafikiven]

Aww, thanks! Really appreciate it.

[amalee1]

You did a beautiful job with the discription. Perfect for this length of story. The twist made me giddy, it just screams loyalty beyond sanity! Please write more of this, i love the "sam anti-christ + Dean helping" Dark but fantastic!

[rafikiven]

Thanks! "loyalty beyond sanity"--I like that and it's so Dean!

I don't have a plan to write any more in this "universe," but who knows, I suppose I could. Regardless, it's nice to hear that someone would like to read more!

[atlanticise]

I read that poem a couple weeks back during Lit class and I actually wanted to look for an SPN fic based on it! This is awesome. Darkly awesome.

[rafikiven]

That's awesome! Funny how we Supernatural fans see our show in everything, eh? I read this poem for the first time since high school English and HAD to write a fic. I hope my fic did justice to what u were looking for.

[iamstealthyone]

He un-slings his automatic and opens fire.

Egad. The things he does for Sammy ...

Such a bleak possibility here, with Sam evil (or seemingly so) and Dean going to such extremes to protect him.

Nicely done. I like how the quietness in the last two lines is such a stark contrast to the violence that preceded it.

[rafikiven]

Sometimes I write and think long and hard about every detail. Sometimes it just comes out and "feels" right, but I don't know why. The last paragraph was the latter--so thanks for letting me know you liked it and why! It means a lot!

[iamstealthyone]

The last paragraph was the latter--so thanks for letting me know you liked it and why! It means a lot!

You're welcome, and thanks for the story. :)

[rafikiven]

I want you to see the story however you want to, but I wrote it with the second one in mind.

So glad you enjoyed it and that you could visualize it with such detail. Thanks for reading and posting!