Chapter 1

[rageblade515]

Devon turned over in his tent. If the Demoness really had been released into the world of the living that could mean that the spirit key had also been brought back. But if the spirit key had been brought into the world of the living then that could mean that any number of demons or hell-spawn could have been released. This was getting complicated

Comments

[edneko]

That was pretty good. I liked how detailed it was with the lights in the forest. The names and classifications were cool too. I don't read much fan fic like writing so I can't compare this to much, but I enjoyed it.

[rageblade515]

Awsome! thanx kyle all feedback that i get from doing this is always greatly appricated. oh and dont worry to much about the charater classifications all shall be explained

[reina]

*nod nod* Except for some grammatical mistakes, it's pretty good.

Kept my attention. Write more! ^_^

[anonymous]

I thought it was pretty good dan. I liked the flow of it. Can't wait to read chap.2

[anonymous]

This is Makie Dan.