Chapter 4

[rageblade515]

Devon looked over to Korrin

Still sound asleep

Devon shook him

"Wake up"

Korrin stirred and looked up, still half asleep.

"what?" he muttered

"We have to get going" said Devon

Korrin sat up fully awake.

"What? Where are we going?"

"We have to get to Calenta and warn the people there."

"Calenta? Thats almost 10 leagues from here."

"Thats why we have

Comments

[anonymous]

YAY, first one to get to read it! =) Good work, I was starting to think that you'd given up. I like how you're not forgetting character and plot development in this, and you also describe the world a little bit. It's not just one fight after another, it builds. Excellent work, keep it going.

-Brendan

[rageblade515]

=) Glad to hear it
and yea thats not all the chapter my grandmother kinda came in while i was writing it at like 11:45 and made me turn it off b4 i could finish it

me?

[alluring_vampyr]

my name you like it? Thanks ^_^ I like your diary it's neat.... ^_^ leave me a note sometime

[rageblade515]

and indeed i shall i hope you dont mind I took the liberty of getting your aim sn mine is Rageblade666 =)