Comments | rager11: This is the story of a girl, Who cried a river and drowned the whole world

rager11

This is the story of a girl, Who cried a river and drowned the whole world

Mar 13, 2006 15:06

Okay, this is the first official draft of my story... i might change it and maybe add on another part, but this is only a 1st draft

plz read and tell me anything i should change by comment or AIM

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shortiee270 March 13 2006, 12:29:59 UTC

i laughed... i cried... i even 'peed myself' as you so lightly phrased it...

well, maybe i didnt, but you did get a few chuckles outta me...

nice job

dreaming_glass March 13 2006, 15:22:31 UTC

i like the little outlined part where he pulls her on top of him, it is always *cute* lol, doing great, I hope there's more.

shortiee270 March 13 2006, 17:03:47 UTC

omg, thats exactly what i said!! i said it was cute too!!

I HAVE A TITLE IDEA!!! dreaming_glass March 13 2006, 15:28:02 UTC

Ahem, how about, "The Sweetest Melody"

shortiee270 March 13 2006, 16:04:35 UTC

btw... thanks for the credit considering i gave you the idea for like, the whole 2nd part..

rager11 March 13 2006, 16:30:11 UTC

3rd part actually, and thank you lauren for all ur help

shortiee270 March 13 2006, 17:02:17 UTC

ur welcome :)