Beyond alienation, the fact that he compares religions belief and romantic love and then says that religious belief requires self-deception to work and that it's less civilized than art, actually reinforces the opposite of his hypothesis to readers who are people of faith.
lol thanks. I was just thinking to myself that I should delete this post since I revised the whole paper and fixed this sentence, but more importantly I also didn't think anyone would actually respond. So thank you!
Beyond alienation, the fact that he compares religious belief and romantic love--then says that religious belief requires self-deception to work and that, in fact, it is less civilized than art-- actually reinforces the opposite of his hypothesis to readers who are people of faith.
I don't remember the technical term, but this literally puts a sentence within a sentence. And those two dash (in Microsoft Word) should automatically become a long dash, which is the symbol you should use. Also, omitting the "all" helps the flow.
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No idea if this is any better XD
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I don't remember the technical term, but this literally puts a sentence within a sentence. And those two dash (in Microsoft Word) should automatically become a long dash, which is the symbol you should use. Also, omitting the "all" helps the flow.
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