Re: >_< LJ ate my first postrahi_1November 23 2006, 23:50:38 UTC
The reason the story is currently about Rahi is because I'm trying to indroduce him enough so everyone knows as much about him as everyone else
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Re: >_< LJ ate my first postrahi_1November 23 2006, 23:31:06 UTC
about the sensei stuff, Naruto doesn't like Ebisu because he, in Naruto's mind, has no idea what he's talking about, & other like ideas. He wants Jiraiya to teach him cause he's so powerful
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another thing I forgot to mention... before now I didn't have any readers, so I can't give them much credit now can I? rest assured, though, in my future chapters I will give yu guys credit for fixing my stupid, horrible, etc. mistakes
ANOTHER thing I forgot to mention...rahi_1November 22 2006, 20:27:57 UTC
Naruto has NOT fully accepted Rahi as his sensei yet...or at least I don't think. That just goes to show how confused a begining writer can be with his own story. That being said, there will most likely be a few things I forget to straiten out or add or etc. so I'll ask you now to plz point them out, but not insult me about it. I realize no one has done that yet, for which I'm thankful for, but it doesn't hurt to make a few precautions.
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before now I didn't have any readers, so I can't give them much credit now can I?
rest assured, though, in my future chapters I will give yu guys credit for fixing my stupid, horrible, etc. mistakes
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That being said, there will most likely be a few things I forget to straiten out or add or etc. so I'll ask you now to plz point them out, but not insult me about it. I realize no one has done that yet, for which I'm thankful for, but it doesn't hurt to make a few precautions.
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And a side comment for you- you REALLY know your stuff!!
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