Fears and Dreams (They all taste the same.)

Mar 19, 2009 02:32

Title: Fears and Dreams (They all taste the same.)
Author: raid_kun
Pairing: TabiRi. Seunghyun/Seungri. Todae. Seunghyun/Daesung. (VERY mild G-Ri and ToBae.)
Rating: NC17 (Smut.)
Word Count: ~1400
Summary: Vampire fic. What else do you need to know?
A/N: As requested by orenjimaru, so this is dedicated to her! ♥ I must apologize for the lack of TabiRi, it seems Todae has ( Read more... )

pairing: todae, pairing: tabiri

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oxygenlove March 18 2009, 18:49:56 UTC
SORRY I'M STEALING FIRST COMMENT
BUT SPOT ♥

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oxygenlove March 18 2009, 19:21:27 UTC
DAUMDAUMDAUM
BB VAMPIRES FTW!
There was TABIRI smex, and TODAE smex.
And GRI and TOBAE.
WOAH.
What did we do to have all these pairings rain down on us???

Ya. what are you talking about? It's jumpy but it flows. Dah. And the flow makes sense and it works.

Bae and his muscles. Blood driping from Bae's chin and hands. DAMN IT. SEXY.
Dae and his innocent little self and wanting Seunghyun ZOMG. The TODAE LOVE. smut smut
Ji and his bitchy self. Period.
Ri and SEX is always good. (Strong Baby this is all your fault, demmit)
AND SEUNGHYUN... jealous and sexy and <3

And I love the way you described the setting. You gave us snippets of their lifes in small quantities and not in one full on "this is how my vampires work" kind of way.

And i think, when i watch Twilight again, I'm not gonna squeel anymore when hot white vampires appear on screen. I mean, Bae and blood dripping from his chin and han-

*dies*

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raid_kun March 19 2009, 05:34:34 UTC
YOU DESERVE ALL THE PAIRINGS IN THE WORLD FOR YOUR AWESOMENESS.

(Except Baeri, because that belongs to me and paper_parasols.)

I have no idea whether the flow works or not, but the whole story played in my head like some disjointed dream, so that's how it turned out. D:

And you're just perverted in thinking bloody Bae is sexy. xDDDDDDD

*REVIVES* *SHOWS YOU MORE BLOODY BAE*

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oxygenlove March 19 2009, 05:41:00 UTC
I AM AWESOMENESSS!!!!!
DUM DUM DUM DUM

Well, all I really want is GRI, the rest, you guys can keep em. But I WUB BAERI TOO!!!

I think, because this is fantasy, and the setting is that for a vampire, it works that it is jumpy. So do not worry. UKI?

BLOODY BAE UGHM.
I AM NOT BAE BAE BAE BAE
<3

MOAR MOAR BLOODY BAE.
PWESE.

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c_h_i_b_i March 18 2009, 19:55:05 UTC
You're a boy!? *squeals and runs*

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c_h_i_b_i March 18 2009, 19:59:53 UTC
XD Sorry couldn't resist. aahhhaa

ANYWAY.

love girls, love boys, moving on~~

THIS WAS EPIC. *eyes shimmer with delight*

i have ALWAYS. and i mean ALWAYS had a fascination with vampires and the many ways you can write them and their 'rules' and 'fears' and so on. and you completely blew me away with ur version! I especially loved the fact that they're not afraid of the sun, but of the noise! o.o If I ever use that in one of my fics, would that be okay with you? XD

And about the smuttiness. Khhh.... You made Daesung look steaming hot here XD And Seungri - so seducing. so delicious. so dark and tempting and GAH!

I LOVED EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET.

I'm not a MAJOR bigbang fan. but i think i could use someone who spazzes about their new stuff to me so i can keep myself updated XD (I'm too lazy to read the latest news XD *shot*)

my msn is at my profile if you wanna :)

<3333333333333333333333 EPIC. xD

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c_h_i_b_i March 18 2009, 20:03:26 UTC
oh and of course (lol im spamming ur inbox)

HOW COULD I HAVE FORGOTTEN

TOP. my favorite member... *eyes turn to shiny orbs* khhh.... you need to write more about bb!vampires. cause ur epicness in writing makes it look so epic. i have no idea if that was a proper sentence, probebly not but i'm sure you get the idea.

<3!!

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raid_kun March 19 2009, 05:36:56 UTC
AWW YES YOU CAN USE MY SILLY IDEAS FOR YOUR FICS IF YOU DON'T FIND IT TOO MUCH FAIL. <3

Seungri was supposed to be borderline mental in this one, but whatever. If he's seductive and sexy then that he is! :D

And your comment is just too cute. xDDDD

Will add you once I have the time! Am rushing to go out now. D:

But YAY Thanks for reading and commenting! <3 <3

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lustfulsister March 18 2009, 20:15:47 UTC
Woaaah... bb as vampires *-*
I wanted to try it too, but never get to do this lol maybe I'll do it sometime, something Vampire Mascarade like <3
Anyway... this was seriously good *-* I love the atmosphere, your narration, G-Ri, ToDae and ToBae XD
Thank you so much for sharing *hugs you*
Aww and congratulations on passing your subject ^-^ *is happy with you*

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raid_kun March 19 2009, 05:37:54 UTC
THANKS FOR CONGRATULATING MEEE. <3

And yes, you should try it someday. Vampires are fun in which you can do just about ANYTHING and it is still believable. LOL.

Thank you for reading and commenting! <3

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iwrite_dotnet March 18 2009, 20:33:27 UTC
I was just about to comment on this when my computer crashed and wouldn't restart. >:(
I was like WTFFF NOOOOO.
It seriously was because of the hotness, I swear to God.

THIS IS AMAZING I ADORE VAMPIRE!FIC URRGGGHHH.
I love your style of writing, I love your characterizations, I love everything. PPPHHHWOOOAAARRRR

I just reread the whole fic and then read your little rant afterwards.
You're a guy? I'm impressed. Your style it so intricate.

I'd actually like to add you on MSN but my MSN is crap and I never go on it. Can I friend you instead?

Okay now I'm off to reread the whole thing because DAAYYYUMMMMM.

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raid_kun March 19 2009, 05:39:31 UTC
AWW SORRY FOR CRASHING YOUR COMPUTER. It must be the massive amount of fail my fic has. Your computer is rejecting my fic! D:

AND YES OF COURSE FRIEND PLEASE. And intricate? I guess that's just the nicer word for rambly. ROFL.

But thank you for reading and commenting nonetheless! <3 <3 <3

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iwrite_dotnet March 20 2009, 23:23:47 UTC
NO YOU BUSTED MY COMPUTER BECAUSE THE FIC WAS UNBELIEVABLY HOT AND YOU SHOULD TOTALLY JUST ADMIT IT NOW OKAY. :)

I friended you.
You seem so modest. I can use that to clean up my inflated ego. :D

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written_affair March 18 2009, 21:27:45 UTC
Oh my Gosh, I loved this. Poor JiYong though ;-;

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raid_kun March 19 2009, 05:40:41 UTC
I'm glad you liked!

And Jiyong.... D: Well, he seemed to be the only one who fit THAT role in my fic. Considering Ri has been chosen to be the main charac by orenjimaru. xD

Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

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written_affair March 19 2009, 07:59:54 UTC
It's always my pleasure lovely!

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