Finished! “It’s the Only Life You’ve Got…” Arc 2 - Chap. 12 and Epilogue

[raiderl]

“It’s the Only Life You’ve Got…”  Arc 2   “…before you know it, it could be gone” Complete; Chapter 12 and Epilogue

It took longer than I wanted but I think I finally have it to where it feels right.  Whew, this one wasn’t easy!  Thank you to all who’ve taken the journey with me, especially to those who took a moment and shared their thoughts.  I’m

Comments

[marygriggs]

I have really enjoyed this story. The way that you've built their relationship and the interactions of all their friends and friends has been very well written. I can't wait to read more and hope you've got more Arc's planned!

Thanks for sharing.

Mary

[bsofthewest]

I don't mean to be a complete bitch (well, maybe I don't really care too much about that), and I know you have a life and other interests which rule your world, but may I suggest that an Arc 3 is still needed for It's the Only Life You've Got. You have issues that were so beautifully developed and described in the first two chapters, upon which your readers would like some closure. More needs to be told about Andy's recovery and that girl needs some good old fashioned lov'n to bring her back to normal. Also, she must have a ticker tape parade and a thank you party given by The Mayor of NYC for her heroism. Not to mention a wedding and perhaps a honeymoon for Miranda, who has been a rather long suffering girlfriend. Come on, my friend, you know I'm right! BS

[raiderl]

Oi, pressure